Reviews for Out of the Dark and into the Green |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I hope you decide to come back to this story and update soon. It is really good. |
![]() ![]() Oh, I hoped Al would stop Harry from killing, or that he would change his mind! Cortney and her brother were well written, similar to addicts and criminals I have met i r l. Poor girl! I look forward to learning more about Alphard. |
![]() ![]() Good story! I suspect you are foreshadowing a slightly darker Harry with the hunting, snakes and pureblood Al... At the same time, I know some very kind, gentle and moral people who have grown up with livestock. They are completely unbothered by slaughtering animals. I look forward to see were you are going with this! Thank you for writing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() such a shame this seems to be abandoned. |
![]() ![]() Good plot,great all I've ever wanted Awesome |
![]() ![]() ![]() Huh, I was going on the idea that Al was the Al from FMA, interesting. I didn't know there was an Al in the HP canon. I'm favoriting by the way, vary good. |
![]() ![]() ![]() A great story so far! Looking forward to reading more! I'll miss Al (Alphard Black) in this story, seemed to be an interesting character. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ugh, Harry is such a drag along. All that training and top of the foodchain stuff and he's just a wimp led around by a leash. No thank you. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Reread the story just now, since your story is one of my favorites. For the story told as well as its potential. One of the things I wonder is to what degree the murder of his mentors cemented Harrys views on humans, magic and Hogwards. While he was alive, Harry could oppose and defy and challenge any teachings, which he did on occation (for instance his girlfriend). With his one pillar of security destroyed we can clearly see how his purpose turned into revenge. Such a zeal might lead to him taking any suggestion that his teacher being wrong, even if only in minor things, as an attack on his mentor. I can clearly see him reactive in an explosive fashion to such a thing, on a certain know-it-all. Sorry for the above. It is not a suggestion, merely an example of how your wonderful story have me wondering in various ways of what will happen to Harry in this new world he had learned about but never truly experienced for himself. I hope that inspiration and time will be yours once more. |
![]() ![]() I don't think words can fully describe how disappointed I am. This has the makings of a perfect story and you created one of the best Harry in fanfiction who isn't pussified! Really hope you wake up one day and continue this |
![]() ![]() ![]() Totally sucked into the story. :) Looking forward to future updates. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great fic man, so hard to find one these days so please update soon. at the end of the previous chapter you said something about a reviewer threatening to off themselves if Harry befriended Granger. That felt like a bit of a spoiler. I don't care either way but don't let people's opinions get to you. Great job looking forward to more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Amazing story! please update soon!x |
![]() ![]() Nice bit of irony at the end of this chapter. |
![]() ![]() Oh, dear, it does look like Al is a Squib from a Pureblood family who lives in the woods when he's not working as an assassin-for-hire. Alphard Black, perhaps? Not the best guardian for Harry. |