Reviews for Out of the Dark and into the Green |
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![]() ![]() Great chapter! I love Sirius. xx |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapters |
![]() ![]() Nice update! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I hope harry made the right decision lol |
![]() ![]() ![]() I feel gross reading that. The ministry allways leaves me feeing gross. Especially when it dealls with an underage harry with no ways of defending himsel . |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'd be willing to beta but I'm dyslexic so would be less than great at grammar and spelling issues. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please update asap! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Just found this story last night and I'm totally in love with it! If you still need a beta, feel free to contact me |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh mein Gott! Eigentlich wollte ich das Kapitel noch einmal durchlesen, um dich dann zu deiner Wahl eines so wundervollen Betalesers zu beglückwünschen (in Englisch natürlich). Blöderweise sind mir in meiner Euphorie über ein neues Kapitel einzelne Dinge entgangen. Schande über mich. Nun, wenigstens weiß ich jetzt, dass ich ein Kapitel nie nur ein einziges Mal kontrolllesen sollte. Solltest du mich wiedereinmal brauchen, ich bin gerne bereit hin und wieder mal auszuhelfen. |
![]() ![]() ![]() And this is where I stop. As much as I like interesting a new stories, I don't like villain Harry stories. This is getting a little too dark for me, and Harry is turning too much into a dark person. But your a great writer so keep it up! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Now, does Black get a glimpse of what Harry casted when he 'cleans' the wand? Oh boy I sure do hope so! It would promt, or at least increase the chance of, the inevitable discussion which enlightens Sirius that his godson holds the same values that his esteemed family. Which leeds to him badmouthing them (which includes Al), which leads to unforgivables being thrown around. Harry thinking before he acts, good. He is not in a battle och enraged, so he actually thinks through what his actions could lead too. He also doesnt instantly give the absolute best answer, seeing how he is in an uncertain and new kind of situation which he hasnt encountered before. So with no experience he takes his time. That being said I wouldn't be suprised if he let his gut reaction out in other, more ordinary situations and maybe there others will glimpse that the light hope isnt so light at all. Especially when he let his guard down (around children? Or around the current black patriarc, who by Al's tales of his family, should share some of the more conservative views on muggles and magic) or when he doesnt understand that some of his views on the wizard and muggle world, and its inhabitants, that he got from Al isnt perticulary politically correct. Again, ignore my ranting if you will. I am just trying out my thoughts on this Harry's chance of 'messing up', which at the same time I would love to happen. And yea it would be completely out of character of Harry to ever befriend Hermione. Thank you for the chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() A very interesting fic my friend and is al dead or still alive what would happen when harry meets draco malfoy a death battle should occur and keep up the good work the only thing bad is how small the chapter is it would be good if it would be bigger |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well not friends with Hermione...I'm out. Shame, excellent story, well written, but I'm too much of a Hermione/harmony fan to care about stories that aren't. Regretfully unfavorited. See the way I see things, without Harry there, she could have been much changed by the troll attack, colder, harder, someone Harry could relate to. Oh well. I wish you all the best |
![]() ![]() ![]() waiting patiently for the next chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love this. Sirius and Harry's meeting made me feel all warm and fuzzy inside. Sirius' love for him is amazing. |