out of all of your characters, so far this one is the best. (but your pokemorph revolution seriers are my favorite stories) Love it so far, cannot wait for more of the new guy...

Umbreon is a bit overdone, why not Phione, Magnezone, Breloom, Ditto, Exploud, Toxicroak, I don't know. Just anything but umbreon!

Well...

COME BACK TO !

You said 'expect to see more of Derek soon'...and it's been way longer than soon. I wanna see him again! Bring back the pokemorphs dammit!

Seriously.

Short,but cool!_

Hm... interesting, very interesting. :) I'm glad to see you're planning to post more. What exactly is a 'taur'? How does Derek get the money to pay for the groceries he needs? (see, you can tell I'm interested).

Quite good, I've come to expect quality work from you, and this definitely is quality

I feel so appreciated, that people get story ideas from RPs with me...

Lights: Who said the RP was with you!

LS: Umm...maybe the fact that Derek came over to my house last night and sat out on the beach for a good four hours waiting for Cayla, who never came?

Lights: Could have been some other friend.

LS: Disbeliever.

Lights: Optimist.

LS: *smothers the Raichu with maple syrup and smacks her repeatedly with a feather pillow* Syrupped and feathered Raichu! *cackles*

Lights: T.T