Loved it.

Aww finally

wouhaou ! ! ! je suis impressionnée ! ! ! Enfin un auteur qui ose ... depuis tant d'année j'attend que REN passe à l'acte en parole et câlin avec notre Kyoko ; MERCI d' avoir fait de KYOKO une femme qui OSE passer à l'acte . Et à notre REN d'assouvir son AMOUR avec son aimée. MEGA MERCI à TOI pour ces lignes sulfureuses et jouissives. C'est comme si j'avais ressenti une certaine libération pour EUX et pour moi qui suis dans l'attente d'un tel dénouement. MANGA 42 au japon et toujours pas de déclarations ni aucunes avancées dans leur AMOUR réciproque , je désespère : limite j'ai envie d'arrêter de lire le manga tant l'auteur nous traîne sur les années... pffffff
Heureusement que des FAN comme toi nous récompense par vos belles histoires.
MERCI : D

Mecha Eroi des... Nice writing

I felt so dirty reading this...and even dirtier for liking it so much! I'm such a Lemon-whore! LOL With the exception of a couple of lines that used words/phrases I personally find distasteful, it was quite well written, and boy was it hot! I think my heart was pounding harder than theirs were! XD

Now I know this story is fin but still give us a glimpse into to the next morning of them confessing to one another and having made love what will follow and that they used no protection ren would have to go Bonkers as realization hits him coming out of his induced pleasure of telling the woman he loves his feelings her telling but that she's he Schofield his fantasy of making love to her and she reciprocating lol the overly responsible one forgot protection or the use of it how will he react and what will she do I love to know this tell if he please and if you're still riding give us this story too

too hot!

This ought to be more than a one shot, whats the after math of it all upon waking how does she react vs versa n a week or 2 later from that point who noticed the new closeness between the two oh if she gets (pregnant there was no protection ) um did he ask her to live with him did they resume where they ended n since their shooting a movie who picked up on the changes you know but also, I just want more so give me more sequel sequel sequel sequel sequel and sequel it demands it

good dick

Not all too bad but a bit too cut off at the end it could have been a bit more...hmm how to put it... Lets just say it ends too abrupt after the sex is over - since Ren is rather a gentle nature compared to Cain there could be some more afterglow But aside from that it's rather hot - I am actually writing a Siblings-to-Ren/Kuon-Kyoko thingie myself and well the guidelines say explicit content isn't allowed. Now after reading your story I wonder how explicit "explicit" actually is ; Yours is actually already explicit I think - or do they just not want words like the P-Word or the V-word written down? I see so much lemon stuff on here that describes quite a lot that I wouldn't consider suitable for teens under 16 and yet the guidelines say it's not allowed ._. Since reviews can't be replied to I'd be interested in your thoughts on this via PM - well if you don't mind that is

awesome short story , it was great.

on a scale of one to ten... DAYUM!()

A ,loved it!

Loved it :)))

This was a good story though I would like to point out that no protection was used or preventive methods though since this is a story where they kind of losing themselves it fits. Either way nicely done.