|Reviews for When The Pawn Hits|
| my right hand chapter 4 . 5/31/2008
wow Sarah, somebody should lock you in a room with some milk and valium.
| sarah chapter 4 . 9/18/2007
I hate you. I hate you.
I hate that you would give up on the stories that you've written. I hate that I can't finish them.
I hate that you've gone on to get published and that you have an actual novel coming out.
I hate that I'm stuck here reading your incomplete writing, wishing that I could write well, too, but not doing anything about it because I keep focusing on what you're doing.
I hate you.
| Violettegal345 chapter 4 . 8/23/2004
You haven't updated this fic in around two years? 0.0 ... Plz update as soon as you can, bcuz out of all ur Brad/Schu fics, I luv this one the most! Keep writing! -
| Erika chapter 4 . 6/27/2004
Please oh please write more. Your writing is wonderfully descriptive, You almost feel drawn into the story as if you were watching from the other side of the room
| ITSAME chapter 4 . 3/11/2004
Wha...this is so sad..and well-written and awesome.
Aheh...congragulation, you have converted me. I am now a CrawfordXShuldich fan. o
| Val Mora chapter 4 . 12/10/2003
...I hope there's going to be more. There had better be more. Because you make me want to see if Schuldig's going to still be cold, and... I just want to find out how it ends. *sighs* And you ended this chapter at a good part, too. -_-
| gameazel chapter 1 . 10/19/2003
please write more! D
incredibly beautiful and breathtaking and *painful*
| suninun chapter 4 . 7/29/2003
Poor SchuSchu! But now Brad's back and everything'll be okay, right? _~ I can't wait to see what happens next, so you better make another chapter!
| Vampire Louis chapter 4 . 6/14/2003
Oh wow, this is the first real Brad x Schu I've ever read and so far I am thoroughly enjoying myself. It's wonderfully written and captivating all in the same turn. I do hope that you honestly consider continuing it because I would certainly like to read more. _
| alydhe chapter 4 . 5/21/2003
oh please continue! poor Shuldig, poor Brad. I feel so sorry for them. This story is absoultely wonderfull.
| Char-sensei chapter 4 . 2/18/2003
ooh, this is really good. i can't wait for the next chapter. you can't stop here! keep writing.
| libitina chapter 1 . 2/7/2003
I do hope there is more planned for this. What I have read so far has been heart-wrenching. Achingly beautiful and incredibly captivating. I couldn't turn my attention away while reading it.
| lux chapter 4 . 1/6/2003
Sorry for the late review on this fic - just wanted to let you know how good I think it is. The rest of your Schwartz stories are just as enjoyable.
I've cheated a bit and read the other 7 chapters that you have posted on your website. I'm dying to find out what has Crawford so worried (though I suspect it has something to do with poor Schu). I love your depiction of all that tension between Crawford and Schu (in particular all of the former's hidden glances). And your Nagi makes a wonderful observer. I love all the little wry comments he makes to himself about Crawford and Schu's relationship and the way that they both desperately want each other.
Please update again soon :D
| Pearl Eternity chapter 1 . 12/28/2002
i keep checking back,but this story's never updated,and i don't understand 's a great story...and i hope you update soon
| Yochan chapter 4 . 12/12/2002
Pleeeaaaaaseee continue this.
::wipes tears from chapter 2::