I dont know if you'll ever update this story, but I dont understand why you have Minato in your tags when you kill him off. :(

But I like Shisui and Itachi too, hope you dont kill them off too.

An incredible story! You’ve truly outdone yourself, your OC is likeable but not a Mary Sue, involved but also not overly so. Please update soon, I hope you’re doing well :) P.S: My heart wants Shisui x Haru but I trust your vision dear Author.

This is so frustrating. I'm gonna drop this now.

Is Takeshi dan non chara? I can't found name nara Takeshi in Naruto wiki

Ik this FF is old but damn Haru is frustrating.

Like she could of saved lives if she wasn't a god damn coward.

Almost living 10 years of her "new Life' and can't still accept that she not in this to go. I can understand not becoming a shinobi because the horror of being a child soldier but that what Naruto is.

Her doing nothing for years was dumb and even more so to do some tiny changes at the LAST second.

I hope Karma bite sher in the ass because She could of done better.

Okay, this is just awesome! I especially enjoy the darker parts of Minato's job as the hokage. I'm dying to know how the confortation between him and Haru would go.

Todo calculado

the worst combination, a stupid sentimental and paranoid girl

Please come back and update, I love this story so much!3

Honestly I thought the story was a Minato/oc pairing so I’ve had a dying candle for that pairing even if the odds seem against at this point lol. Ever the hopeless I am

Hmm i love the story in all honesty she’s a better person than me the grudge I would have would last many lifetimes

I feel like I should have revenge take revenge against those I trust and they threw it away because thanks to it they are alive

Love it️

Whew, I'm tardy to this.

Dunno. Romance wise. Someone good for her is important I think. Not just chemistry ya know? Could use some emotional health.

uma pena voce não ter continuado a escrever a historia era muito boa!