Excellent story! I can’t wait to see where you take this.

RIP this story hasn't been updated in years, it was getting so juicy. Will check back in a few months 3

I would like it if there is a multiple endings with Haru ending up with each male like Yuzuru, Shisui, Eji, Kenta, the Nara childhood friend or one where she stays single.

Either the best friend or Shisui for the romantic interest.

*heavy breathing*

I binged this in just one day and I NEED MOAR. Please, come back D:

I'd be happy with whoever you decided to pair her with. Sorry in advance for the long comment.

With Takeshi it would make sense. They have a lot of unresolved issues, but at the same time they were friends for such a long time. If anyone can figure out the whole past life thing it would most likely be him. And he wouldn't refute it after seeing the evidence laid out in front of him all those years. I saw this "Nara Fixation" in a few fics and to me it's Canon, but it's something along the lines of a Nara picking one person and deciding early on that that's the person they're going to spend the rest of their life with. Romanticizes the idea of love at first sight, but with the twist of love at first "Troublesome". I remember that scene from when they were still in the Academy and Haru was called a "Pretty Girl" before Takeshi said to drop it because "she wouldn't understand". It would have been a long time coming with those two.

Shin is a branch member of the Hyuga so if Haru and him did end up together I'd imagine that their future would be one with them having no children (unless the Curse Seal is stopped). Not to say there's nothing wrong with deciding not to have children, but I'm thinking more along the lines of an epilogue for them. They're a bit closer to enemies to friends to lovers if you do decide to go that route, but if done right I think it would work out.

Shisui is also someone I can imagine coming in as a love interest. It would be interesting to see how all of them spent the time where they thought that Haru was dead, but I feel like Shisui probably has a lot of lingering guilt over inaction or something. He's the one she told about Kabuto, I feel like his love would be born out of desperation to not lose a friend.

Yuzuru has grown and I wouldn't be opposed to him being a love interest. He's not a Shinobi and I can imagine that appealing to Haru, especially with everything she's gone through. Obviously if she was able to she would want to go back to Konoha for her brothers, but there's so many ramifications politically if she does go back to Konoha where everyone thinks she died. Relations with Kumo were affected by her "death".

Also it would be funny to me if Izumo Tenma just came out of nowhere and absolutely stole Haru's heart while everyone else was either coming to terms with their feelings, giving Haru space, or attempting to work up the courage to confess.

I hope you're okay.

Great fic!

Woaw ! I really love tour story !
I really like the fact that "civilians" are saving their "ninja" friend. It feels like the roles are reversed.
Shout out for Yuzuru ! I was so happy to finally see someone for Haruka. Seems like she has her "naruto"
Yuzu's father is just so cool omg ! I'm so glad his on their sides (even if it suit him more than anything else).
For the romance I was really a fan of the TakeshixHaruka duo you know... and I still love it (strongly). But I don't really want her to go back to Konoha... Even if Danzo dies, she still was "buried" by her village. And then the story with Kumo would no longer hold water... Anyway, she deserves to be happy (with Takeshi! Sorry, I love Takeshi too much even if he hasn't appeared for a long time).
There are so many things I would like to comment (positively of course) on your story that I could write an essay for you.
I only read your fiction 2 days ago and I couldn't stop reading! You are incredible! Your fiction is impressive, captivating and just...
You know what, I don't have the words...
In any case, thank you very much for this story.
I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

RIP, nevermind. Just saw the last update date was 3 years ago...

Wait a minute, I just finally reread this fic and saw the AN. Is it Yuzuru?! I was originally rooting for Takeshi(Nara?), but I would be so down to read how Haru navigates Capital poltics.

I can't believe it ends at this :(

Alternative plots theme

In a alternate reality - scene your parents died attacked by cloud ninja but cloud claims they we're missing ninja yeah like that future kidnapping line theft of Hinata okay nope more like cloud village just letting their ninjas kill but if they get caught are labeled missing ninja.

SpongeBob one hour later narrator voice

One year later...Kumo cloud village goes up in smoke boom and none is any wiser to a little girl in konoha but it's just all just a coincidence if she would do that only her best bff takeshi would only suspect his genius friend

She should prank them like something that would keep the naras awake for 72 hours noooo sleep period ooooooo how would that turn out

Please continue it's awesome and as for pairing Shisui will be better

I dont know if you'll ever update this story, but I dont understand why you have Minato in your tags when you kill him off. :(

But I like Shisui and Itachi too, hope you dont kill them off too.

An incredible story! You’ve truly outdone yourself, your OC is likeable but not a Mary Sue, involved but also not overly so. Please update soon, I hope you’re doing well :) P.S: My heart wants Shisui x Haru but I trust your vision dear Author.