although i must say its probably a fools hope for it to be finished after 8 years. id assume its been put on the back burner to be forgotten about

man i really hope that one day youll come back to finish this story. i know youve broken it up into several books but this is the latest one. absolutely love what youve done to change it up from the normal story!

I know life gets in the way and you're writing books for other things but I hope and I wish you would return to this story and finish it

Quick question : Flamel was a Master of Alchemy when people did not even know that air was a mixture of different gases. Before the identification and denotations happened.
How come Harry has to be so knowledgeable about muggle science in order to become an alchemist? A man who created the greatest Achievement in Alchemy, the philosopher 's stone, probably around 1500's if not earlier would not require them, so why does Harry?
Is this just in an effort to show how hard Alchemy is and all that stuff or is this a plot hole?
Also, has the story been abandoned? Coz I read all 3 parts in the last week and this one is about to be over but there's no 4th part published yet.
What's going on?

Happy weekend,
Sarah

what a great series you have created both hp and ak series

please do try to update hp series

Oh and yes old enough ti think this threw because I am 50 years old turning 51 in April.

Tom you fool there is always a choice. It just you don't think about all of the choices. And if you give choices there are choices a person can choose that you didn't give. I have been confronted with such situation in real life and chose something they didn't give me. But I cane up with and chise for myself.

Thanks for writing this great trilogy.
I love everything about this.
Thanks so much for peaking my interest in this and making me a fan.
I’m so going to share this to all my friends who will love this great story.
I love that Harry made friends within the four houses.
I still think there are unfinished plot lines.
When will Selene make another appearance?
Would Lucius and Draco get what’s coming to them?
I strongly feel another story needs to be made
Thanks so much again for writing this work of ART!
Take care and be well!

Introducing the magical teens to Nintendo was hilarious. Blaises reaction had me laughing.
I so hope that Harry gets revenge for what Lucius did by outing Lupins furry issue.
Onward I read.
Take care and be safe!

I'm the first reviewer of 2024! Wahoo!
So far the 3 part in this storyline is intriguing.
Also for some reason the story is much darker than the others, so that's surprising.
Wonder what will happen next?
Onward I read.
Take care and be well!

Intriguing dark story, more so than the last one, killing Hermione. You could still have Lisa as wife, Daphne second wife, or Astoria as wife, or Tonks, depending on if Harry will be Lord Black.

I really enjoyed your story

This is a really rough start, and you set yourself up for it.
Book one was good and interesting. Writing was a bit rough, but clearly you know that; Book two cleaned up a lot of the technical writing issues I spotted. Book two was great in many ways, you developed the themes and deviated from cannon in interesting ways. Your old blog seems to be gone, but I can understand why you felt the need to remove Hermione. Probably too much puberty talk, but hey, he's 12.

The issue I have is this was really a relationship centric fiction, and you set up summers as important time for several relationships (Lisa and Selene in particular), and we just spent 5 chapters and burned 3 months with nothing but an angst fest instead of developing any of them. Harry,. who before this made huge progress in opening up to people reverted back to pre-book1-chapter1 levels of distance, and we didn't even do much to develop Sirius. I'm not saying Hermione's death shouldn't be traumatizing, but it needs to be in a way that develops Harry, not regresses him.

In short, I'm 5 chapters in and not seeing anything that made the fic enjoyable for the first two books.

Thanks for another great (re) read. Nicely done series. I hope your original writing is working out well for you. Also hope you find your way back to this series at some point.

You put the wrong name for Daphne's father. You put Danielle instead of Nathaniel