Reviews for The Evolution of Organized Crime
SallyForth chapter 1 . 11/12/2021
I wish you would stop faving yourself. It's clear your faking it.
WeWeebWeepRainbows chapter 12 . 8/6/2021
can't wait for the next chapter! 3
altruisticfish chapter 12 . 8/3/2021
I enjoyed this story. I appreciated the inclusion of kintsugi. It is a very creative solution to Haruhi's problem. I would be interested in seeing how this story continues to develop.
tag wiskay chapter 12 . 6/29/2021
just a note that I love your portrayal of Haruhi - so refreshing to read such a well-balanced, human female protagonist
a loyal reader chapter 12 . 2/9/2021
Wow. I know it's been almost a year, but I really enjoy this fanfic and, if you so choose, would be really excited to see an update. Happy writing!
reptoholic chapter 12 . 12/28/2020
Soooooo much Potential !
reptoholic chapter 11 . 12/28/2020
Hope she keeps it ip
reptoholic chapter 10 . 12/28/2020
Hope she is not manipulated this time.
reptoholic chapter 9 . 12/28/2020
interesting a contender for her hand
reptoholic chapter 8 . 12/28/2020
hope she does not get used
reptoholic chapter 7 . 12/28/2020
Who was it? the boy?
reptoholic chapter 6 . 12/28/2020
AWWWWWWWW
reptoholic chapter 5 . 12/28/2020
damnnnnn
reptoholic chapter 4 . 12/28/2020
hahaha she knows! can't wait till her father meets them
reptoholic chapter 3 . 12/28/2020
hahaha, how old are they?
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