Reviews for The Evolution of Organized Crime |
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![]() ![]() I wish you would stop faving yourself. It's clear your faking it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() can't wait for the next chapter! 3 |
![]() ![]() ![]() I enjoyed this story. I appreciated the inclusion of kintsugi. It is a very creative solution to Haruhi's problem. I would be interested in seeing how this story continues to develop. |
![]() ![]() ![]() just a note that I love your portrayal of Haruhi - so refreshing to read such a well-balanced, human female protagonist |
![]() ![]() Wow. I know it's been almost a year, but I really enjoy this fanfic and, if you so choose, would be really excited to see an update. Happy writing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Soooooo much Potential ! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hope she keeps it ip |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hope she is not manipulated this time. |
![]() ![]() ![]() interesting a contender for her hand |
![]() ![]() ![]() hope she does not get used |
![]() ![]() ![]() Who was it? the boy? |
![]() ![]() ![]() AWWWWWWWW |
![]() ![]() ![]() damnnnnn |
![]() ![]() ![]() hahaha she knows! can't wait till her father meets them |
![]() ![]() ![]() hahaha, how old are they? |