A unique look at the challenge, really enjoyable and I look forward to any chance you decide to return to this excellent story. Thanks for the great read!

you don't need to put this in the store

This is good so far I would love to read more please update soon

please update soon i love this story

Please update soon i love this story please please please

Wow. That's quite a mash of challenges and ideas you've taken there. But alas, judging by the way you hadn't updated since 2014, I'd say that you've actually bit off more than you can chew. Sad, really.

I love to see the rest of the story so far it's all been set up

Please write next chapter already. Thank you very much. I really appreciate it and enjoyed it a lot.

It's a good start, but, you should slow down and a few more detail. You shouldn't rush the story let it guide you. Good luck.

so confused

Interesting story so far.

I have just started this story, and I will try to update as often as I can.

Great chapter and story so far please continue this story soon.

You've got a nice start, I'm interested in seeing where this goes.

UPDATE SOON!