|Reviews for Melina, The princess of the light|
| zspy3 chapter 1 . 9/4
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/4/2015
| AnimeFan001 chapter 1 . 1/1/2015
| Kuru chapter 1 . 12/24/2014
I'm rather amused. I'd like to read more for this certainly is a different kind of approach to tell a story. Considering the atmosphere in the stories of VHD, I'd like to see how you'll execute it in the way you've now began the story.
P.S: A few advices/notes. First, there're a few, quite simple misspellings and if I read correctly, you may be missing a word or two from here and there. My memory could be vague so sorry about that. On the other hand, of course, maybe you're already aware of them. Secondly, if possible, find a beta reader. Might make things easier and they can help you improve your writing.