Reviews for Three's A Crowd (But Pack Sticks Together) |
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![]() ![]() You should make Kakashi go crazy like when Pein stabbed Hinata and Naruto went berserk |
![]() ![]() ![]() I LOVE THIS HOLY CRAP. And chibi is perfect and Okugi is amazing and all your characters are so perfectly done and I love this story so, so, so much. I read the first part of this fic years ago and am only just coming back to it and Thank You. Seriously, from the bottom of my heart. Thank you. |
![]() ![]() I love this story it's rare to find a kakashi time travel that's been completed or isn't on hiatus keep up the good work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Whew! For a second there I thought you might kill one of the more important characters who didn’t die until much later in the original timeline (Jiraiya) to break the trio’s confidence in themselves right before the Kannabi Bridge mission, which would make sense but it would probably also make me cry. Regarding Tenzō, it’s alright, I can wait. Mostly because there are so many other interesting developments to focus on in the meantime. I’m not sure how you manage to juggle so many different plot points with so many characters doing different things and all of them happening at once, but somehow definitely works to keep the story engaging instead of confusing. So now Kakashi is pulling away again, huh? Forgetting that doing so is what got him into the original timelines mess, despite his nindo being different this time, is likely to lead him to making similar mistakes. He’s so very good at accidentally convincing his friends of the opposite of his true feelings, just like usual. Now they’re back to not feeling like they can trust him to be there when they need him, no matter his intentions. So many rocky foundations getting shaken up all at onceit’s intense. |
![]() ![]() ![]() YaaaAAsS QuEeN! Ohmagoosh I'm so happy you updated! TT This book is incredibly well written and actually updates! Thank you sooo much for writing it! And gotta know; is Orochimaru gonna turn out a good(ish) guy? Byyee love Jinx |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Loved it! Good idea of how to keep Oro loyal. Give him mysteries to solve, give him conundrums to untangle, give him work to do, and people to connect, and he'll have less incentive to go radical. Oh, the fluff of Okugi with the kids! You know what you'll have to do in the sequel, right? Baby Naruto, baby Sasuke and somehow baby Sakura going on "pony" rides on Okugi! The fluff must flow! Hell, by the time of canon, maybe Kashi and [...] will have a little rugrat to hang on Okugi's ears. One more thing I remembered. Bijuu have that "telepathy" thing between themselves. I don't remember why they didn't use it before far into the Shippuuden (probably because Kishi didn't come with the idea yet), but it's probably something with the seals. When Kushina will loosen up hers more and more with time, I bet past!Kurama and future!Kurama will have a nice and friendly discussion... who am I kidding, it'll be a shouting and posturing contest. |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh yes, please, make a sequel this is my favorite fanfiction of naruto and I read a lot . and if is not indiscreet what is your mother tongue? one of your french fan;) |
![]() ![]() Oh i'm not sad anymore. I made the coment right afther finish the chapter but now I saw your note. Yeah a sequel. So zetsu and madara are going to be there? I hope cuz I feel there is a short time to just present them now and get ride of them |
![]() ![]() I'm so happy about this new chapter, but so sad about the ending. I thought it would have more chapter after the war of how kakashi would deal with zetsu. Because he is the thing behind kaguya. Madara was soing sneaky things too before obito he was the one controling Kirib thatxs how he ochestrade Rin death. There is Danzou too. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good call on Okugi's part in getting Orochimaru's attention. That might be a good swaying point. How many can say they were a sensei to a bijuu, or half in this case. Man, he may have his (somewhat) good intentions, but the Third is looking sketchier with each chapter. I think his motives were always the problem, too. His focus for peace was way too narrow (all for Konoha), and at the same time he either was (selectively) ignorant of how the populace of his village was behaving, or just left them to their own devices while he worked for his pipe-dream peace. I say pipe-dream because, again, his focus was too narrow and he was more than willing to stab other villages in the back so long as his came out okay. And, you know, not cool. Sometimes I think he let Danzo do what he did just so the Third would have a scapegoat of his own when things went ass-up. Also, for someone who's looking as guilty as he does, the Third doesn't have a *lot* of room to talk in regards to reprimanding Kakashi about breaking the git's hand. Least Kakashi had a good reason for it, imo. Dare I ask what sort of rumours that little altercation is going to cause? Not like it was team Minato's fault, though. Another reason I'm so done with the village citizens as a whole. Kakashi, Kakashi, Kakashi. On one hand I can see why he wants to go it alone. On the other that just is NOT going to work. Hopefully (but I doubt it) Okugi and Kurama might convince him otherwise... then again those two might agree with him. Idiots. I really enjoyed the bigger focus on Okugi in this chapter. Seeing him interact with other characters on his own is always interesting/entertaining. Him (pseudo) telling of the Hokage was a high point, I admit. I better stop as this got way too long. Looking forward to the Kannabi Bridge mission! |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I’m new to the story and just read the whole thing over the course of a few days. It’s impressive how much you’ve developed as an author throughout this and extremely inspiring. I find myself impatient for the inclusion of Tenzō, especially since you keep teasing me with hints of how he could possibly become involved but the story just isn’t there yet. It’s mostly because he’s one of my favorite characters, and one of only two other adults that the original Kakashi seemed to have any mutual deeper connection with (he and Gai) so I’m curious how you’ll play the development of their relationship on this universe where Kakashi isn’t nearly so isolated or broken. Beyond that, I’m excited for the next chapter and eagerly anticipating further story development. You always manage to keep me on my toes, cliffhangers or no, and it’s as engaging as it is infuriating. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Omg, you just made my day with the update and the story just keeps getting more thrilling. I'm already eager for the next chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is a really good story! It's super interesting ! I couldn't stop reading! |