So exciting, lots and lots of things happened in this chapter and I can't wait to find out where they lead. Will Okugi break himself out?, will Jiraya and Kushina save him, with Jiraya undoing the seal? Or will he end up in roots possession? As evil as it sounds I hope it's the latter as that would make for the most interesting outcome and I bet Okugi would somehow use it to his advantage in some way even if it's only gathering information til he's rescued.

I had the best image of Chibi trying to explain to Minato when Naruto is born about Han and the deal they made. I ended up laughing out loud about how I imagined Minato's face to be.

I'm glad to see Obito is finally learning something and not just getting beat up, though I bet both him and Minato will be in tears of joy when Chibi and Rin return alive. Also in regards to your reply I think 'White Demon' works just as well as 'White Death'. All the Best til I next hear from you :P

I love this so much. You just can't stop reading it.

I love that Han wants to visit.

Older Kakashi (Okugi) is certainly living up to his "demon" moniker! :-O

Hope you update soon. The story is so much fun now.

Good chapter. And that fight between Okugi and ROOT? Very satisfying.
Good portrayal of Han. I as well always saw him as a big softie. Scary appearance and caring heart fit rather well with polite and calm Kokuo.
As always, already can't wait for the next one.
Kokuo is more of a horse-dolphin than a ram.

Great work here! Keep up the excellent work you are doing!

Good chapter as always, can't wait for more!

poor kakashi .

Though will Naruto still be the child of prophecy that they expect if he had a different child hood? chances are he might have a drastic personality Change like in that road to ninja movie.

Ah beans! But Kukuo is pretty nice so this shouldn't be bad... I hope not, at least. And you GO, freaking Oku'kashi!

I like how Kurama is a good-guy, but still his grumpy, "I'm not *that* much of a good guy" self.

I love Okugi's new moniker 'White Death' it's so cool. I feel so sorry for poor Obito in this one I mean it's one thing to be beat up and tortured by your enemy like Chibi and Rin but completely another for it to be done by those who are suppose to be your allies and family. I'm glad that you won't be putting romance in this fic as I find it ruins a lot of fics and/or is/becomes the main focus; which completely puting me off the fic if I'm not reading it for that pairing whatever it is. Until next time, I wish you all the best. :P

very good. Poor Obito

Hi! So this is absolutely amazing and if it weren't three in the morning I would wax poetic about your writing ability but unfortunately it is and I have school in the morning. I do remember you asking for fic recs (several chapters ago) and I'd like to add 'Recourse' by Ourliazo. And I should go now but my god your Kakashi characterisation is beautiful and I love you and I'm falling asleep and bye.

Fantastic work on this chapter. Really enjoyed it. Good length as well. Also damn you cliffhangers!