It’s official I adore Barchoke and Litchfield. They’re both hilarious. This is very well written but still a little hard to understand even with text-to-speech but that may just be me at the moment and have nothing to do with your writing. I’m not very well so that’s probably not helping.

Apologies, I recently discovered I was logged in on my phone on a different account. Barcoke and Litchfield are hilarious. Their conversations are a little hard to keep up with but that might just be me.

It’s official I adore Barchoke and Litchfield. They’re both hilarious. This is very well written but still a little hard to understand even with text-to-speech but that may just be me at the moment and have nothing to do with your writing. I’m not very well so that’s probably not helping.

Barcoke and Litchfield are hilarious. Their conversations are a little hard to keep up with but that might just be me.

This goblin/Gringotts arc just refuses to end. Chapter 19/46 in a 630k word story, and barely anything has happened. I'm done.

nice for MR. granger to be different from his wife and not the ex-military he is in some story. Not slamming those stories at all, just saying it's nice to get another view of a canon character.

It's nice to see Moody have a bit of a different role too.

First things I have read positive about Molly in a long time.
Not only kicking Dumbles out, but in telling Ginny to leave harry alone.

Just because Dumbles sees unicorns farting rainbows for the greater good,
makes him no less a beastie - a delusional monster.

This is a thoroughly enjoyable story!

I rather like Harry and Hermione's mutual anxiety about saying or doing the wrong thing and failing the other's expectations, putting their budding relationship at risk. But I also appreciate how you're avoiding the HP trope of Ron-bashing, letting him stay as their friend even as he also tries to figure out the new dynamic.

Ginny... *shakes head* that girl really, *really* needs a therapist. Which is exactly what Diary Tom Riddle isn't.

For all that he's clearly kind-hearted, your Dumbledore had actually been rather horrifying at times, with his blind faith in The Greater Good having led him to make disastrous decisions. On the other hand, your Lucius Malfoy is every inch a villain, and quite clearly the éminence grise of the wizarding world.

But there's one point that puzzles me, and I don't know if I missed a crucial bit of information in my reading or if it hasn't been explained yet: What happened eleven or more years ago to put Hogwarts in such dire straits financially? If the lack of money from Harry's vault is making such a huge difference in their budget that the story has indicated so far, then how did they get along without it before Oct. 31, 1981?

This entire story has been fantastic to read and SO well written for both character development and plot. The powwow in Dumbledore’s office and associated reactions as well as the conversation that Snape had with him, were extraordinary. Those moments in his office really got me. Incredible!

Performing live on Privet Drive

"Bill Weasley and the Goblins"

Your shoemaker shop scene was brilliant, it was just flowing with the Diagon Alley vibe. Well the Gringott action was pretty nice too.

As part of my annual "read my favorite fanfics," I came to visit. I still love your story. Thank you.

I've really enjoyed your story and your take with original and fleshed out characters. I hope that you come back to this story soon as it has been quite a ride!