Reviews for Menagerie of Birds
Guest chapter 2 . 9/11
Holy crap, I have to say as much as I love this idea and your writing - which seems so far very well done- your very frequent use of exclamation points in the dialogue takes a lot of my focus out of where it should be. It seems to pull one out of immersion in the story because you think that he's just exclaiming all the time when you could have descriptives after the speech for how things are said. Please alter this as I think it would really improve your story and how your readers can get into it.
Guest chapter 3 . 8/13
Anyone else think he dresses like the man in the yellow hat for bird handleing
Guest chapter 20 . 7/18
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Very nice.
kyuguy chapter 20 . 7/11
Hey could you make newt scamander visit and be amazed with Harry and the birds and flirt with him so tony gets jealous and you have a one shot arc or possibly a recurring character
dekusdante chapter 20 . 7/2
Love it really good!
mizukikage chapter 20 . 6/20
At least he's not feeling bad about his parents being gone. Everyone deserves to have some happiness in their lives.
kyoko8lin chapter 20 . 6/14
Um.. I'm sorry, are you really updated your chapter? Why I still saw chapter 20, which you already updated long ago?
Kuriboh Girl chapter 1 . 6/13
I read this chapter when you last updated. Where is the new one?
Armapella chapter 20 . 6/13
Halloween was not two days ago, was it? I couldn't have slept THAT long!
Dagger-Seishin chapter 20 . 6/9
Of course you'll drive me batty trying to figure out what he is
xxxLeanniexxx chapter 20 . 6/8
Awesome! Go Harry!
Guest chapter 18 . 6/5
I own cursed child to, and i still haven't been able to get myself to read it after all of the things people have said about it, plus its a script and not a book i will read it eventually though.
Guest chapter 12 . 6/5
You typed in bold eagle, and not bald eagle.
Guest chapter 8 . 6/5
Pizza it awesome for sure, I live about 15 minutes out of town so the only delivery place that drives to our area is pizzahut or waitersexpress but the second makes us pay an extra 10 dollars since so live so far out, so we are always getting pizza, like an hour ago my brother ordered pizzas for us, it was pretty awesome.
Guest chapter 3 . 6/5
i really like how you added in that colin was getting irritated by the crowd i love when authors add in things to a story. It makes it seem all that more real.
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