Corporal punishment? What century is this?

Sigh.
I was going to post a good review of how well this was written etc, and then I got to this part:
''Signs of physical abuse, Welts on his back''? - And you've lost me.
There is none of that because HE. WAS. NOT. PHYSICALLY. ABUSED. Why do people add crap that's not there? I was enjoying this up to this point, but now I'm going to stop reading. Completely.
Because you aren't having them react to the books, you are having them react to your own made up version of the books, where you inflict even worse on Harry than actually happened. Why? Why do you people do this?!
And then there's what I've just seen in the comments about changing the pairings and Weasley bashing. Sorry, but no. The story is about who HARRY chose to be with, not who YOU WANTED him to be with. same with the other pairings. I'm gone.

To Dragons6: Ginny is not a stalker she is a normal girl who had a crush and got over it and fell in love with a guy who fell in love with her too. They understand each other in ways no one else does - they both went through Voldy possession, they share the same humour and enjoyments etc.
As for Charlie, hate to break it to you, but Harry is straight.

thank you getting good thank you

This is such a good story! Love Siri and Harry’s bond. Are you shipping Harry x Charlie or Harry x Luna?

I don’t know how you’ve managed to destroy every single character’s characterization, but damn you’ve done it.

Wow, this is good..hope it gets updated soon...I do wonder who Harry will end up with...I knownthe movies he ended up with Ginny...I personally do not like the couple together...and it looks like Ginny, Charlie and Luna are veering for his attention...Ginny is a stalker to me..not good for him...Charlie js nice but he is about 8nyears older than him...so to me that is iut...he needs someone his age group...I like Luna..she is unique and thinks outside the box...plus, Harry is uncomfortable around Ginny...I do wonder if u pair him with Charkie it would be very uncomfortable during dinners with Ginny there showing her displeasure that she didn't grt her Harry..so I'm rooting for a Harry/Luna relationship...

Why am I not surprised all the adults were on Hermione's side once again? How is it that in every story I read where the interactions of the trio in the first part of their first year at Hogwarts is exposed the boys are always to blame when in truth no one would ever put up with someone talking to them the way she always did with them? Hermione was very, very bossy and extremely pushy towards them. They did everything they politely could to tell her to leave them alone and she refused to listen because it wasn't what she wanted. She decided she wanted to be around them and literally forced them to deal with her presence in their midst. And since they were 11 year old boys of course it was going to come to a head sooner rather than later. Because she valued her teachers and classes she was trying to change them to be more like herself instead of just accepting them for who they were. All through the books she tries to change who they are. Yet no one ever tells her off for it. Everyone always jumps on the boys when they get fed up and tell her something that's even slightly mean or hurtful. Even if what they say is truth she needs to bloody well hear.

I am liking this book but hate the idea that Hermione would be more important for Remus than Harry.. It's ludicrous.. it's getting on my nerves..

While i love this chapter, wow confusing at a point, throus more deteal on how every one drank at the same time. Would think after the first two poped everyoone would not drink or eat anythang.

Small correction.

Grand Parents are 1/4 each of them your DNA
Parents / Parents Bro or Sis are Half.

since Dudley is Harry Cousino they have a set of grand parents in common. In this case His Mom and Aunt Mother and Father. His Grand Parents on his mother side.

Dudley would Shair DNA because they would be fist cousins still blood related

still good story

I understand how the urge to write can leave you, but just know you'll still have people who would love to read whatever you think of next for this series.

I know it's been four years and this story is unlikely to ever continue, but as you said, the fifth book is the one that will be truly interesting. I was quite looking forward to it. Is there any chance you had more of this written on another site, or on your computer? I'd love to see even a partial glimpse of some of the things that would have come out during that reading.

It would definitely be better with recitation of the text. Nobody watches FanFiction anymore so it’s not like it matters. I’d recommend adding like three or four sentences of text for each paragraph so readers aren’t confused.

Loved it

just curious if you're still active? this story has been exactly what I needed to read. easy to follow without book and your character development beyond JKR is wonderful. please come back and continue even if this isn't your favorite book!