|Reviews for The(questionable) burdens of leadership of a troll Emperor|
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/17
Disgusting disgusting disgusting disgusting disgusting
| Unanimous chapter 1 . 9/8
I have to say I really enjoyed all 4 entries they were great. I liked the characters, smut, romance and action. There is only one real complaint I have but it's a big one. At the end of the last novel the author made Naruto not care about other men possibly sleeping with his wife and this really bothered me. It's just so out of character for him. Not to mention that it was left extremely ambiguous wether it would be okay or not. I understand that he sleeps around but that is all with at his wife's behest. Honestly this made me ki d of regret reading this last bit and having seen it because it made it difficult to read any further. I hope that if there is a next novel this is put to a close in a way that doesn't make Naruto a cuck and possibly be more faithful himself? That's all that is for reading my review.
| HurZysn chapter 29 . 9/3
this has been quite the interesting story if you ever do continue I look forward to reading more
| Sensepi Rescopula chapter 29 . 8/25
All Father Noodle i shall wait for this sequel until I die and in the case that you shall die I hope that you have chosen a worthy successor to the throne of thy kingdom may the gods be with you amen...
| Jen chapter 29 . 8/22
They never did anything with the Jinki Xanna took from Minaka in the prequel, did they? Maybe something to keep in mind for a sequel?
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/31
I really wish you made omakes of them from time to time on your more recent fiics like metagaming
Ya already yoinked darkness from kono sube after all
Whats the harm of a visiting omnipotent god? And his wife and pet?
| Zarroc789 chapter 29 . 7/29
Also THANK YOU for finishing your stories unlike 95% of all other fanfictions
| Zarroc789 chapter 29 . 7/29
I love your For Love of Magic series and the 2 sequels, but hope that you come back to this series someday. When you are done with your new stuff of course.
| re-reader chapter 29 . 7/21
Every time I re-read this I hope for another sequel in the Stars Wars verse since that is the only one i think could handle them. I imagine Xanna trying to corrupt the Jedi and Naruto trying to prank the Sith. I imagine them creating temples on random planets filled with treasure chests filled with xxx magazines and xxx toys.
| PappyOldGuy chapter 29 . 7/4
Interesting and (well enough written in my opinion) a very good story. I like it, I like it a lot! It seems to be meshing the realities quite well, and I can hardly wait to read more from you. I do know this, when someone who is not the creator of a character, writes about them, it is to have them do something that the creator doesn't want to or didn't think of. I know that I always think of my favorite characters doing things, I have never read of in books or seen them doing in movies. I think it is fantastic that others (here in "FanFiction") are actually writing their stories of what they want them to do in a "What If" world. For those who complain that the characters would not do this or that, forget them. You need to write this first for yourself, and then for the rest of us who do enjoy your take on what just might, could, should, would and probability (if a frog had wings, his ass wouldn't bump the ground nearly so often) can happen. I do know this as well, I am enjoying it and will follow such stories as long as you will write them. Also, do NOT feel pushed to post, sometimes the words and thoughts just flow and sometimes you have to cogitate for a bit. Just learn to let them grow at their own pace and those of us who appreciate them will be here to read them when they are posted.
Thank you so much for sharing.
| harry uzumaki chapter 29 . 7/2
I have read it twice now just to experience it again. Thank you for writing and sharing.
| jackal011 chapter 29 . 6/29
well they managed to corrupt her
your ending was hilarious
| Kenshin135 chapter 29 . 6/26
While there was still plenty of rough moments and things to complain about, It did improve enough to not regret reading and finish. Overall, it was a good enough story taken as a whole.
The biggest complaints would be the ending of part 1 (killing off the support cast, essentially replacing all the build up and expectations for their future post Naruto with a tragic ending that more or less only served to highlight Naruto's overall apathy at the cost of making everything done in that world up to that point feel worthless.), the DC universe in general (Taken as a parody followup to make fun of how overpowered and awesome Naruto and Xanna are is fine, but it does feel like a wasted opportunity. I'm not even a fan of it, but I know enough that there are god level threats, which leads into...), and that there were no credible antagonists.
Really, they got waaaay too much power outta just simply absorbing the 10-tails, but even if you take it as AU fanfic logic, and that really was all that was needed in that realm to achieve nigh-omnipotent Primordial God status (despite the Narutoverse being actually pretty low tier on the multiversale power scale), where were their counterparts in the other universes, upset at the meddling of outsiders in their realm (excluding Otsutsuki is fine because the story was finished before they were a thing, but DC has characters that coulda played that roll, Sekirei was a blank slate that coulda had something, Ascended coulda been power scaled to be relevant, etc)? Other outsiders traveling the multiverse making their own mischief?
Perhaps incompatibility issues, where their own power doesn't quite mesh with the laws of the new universes and they have to learn how the new realms work to incorporate their logic into their own power base. Perhaps being gods now means they really did need worshipers native to that realm to fuel their more powerful abilities (being just fairly strong without it, an excuse to depower them in worlds they don't wanna micromanage a religion).
Plenty of opportunity to put credible threats and obstacles in their way as opposed to just settling on them having to hold back their power just to deal with their own boredom and still just roll over any opposition anyway.
| PappyOldGuy chapter 1 . 6/26
An intriguing start to what promises to be a good story. I have read quite a number of "FanFiction" stories, and many have been enjoyable. It looks like it will likely take a few chapters to get all your main characters and store line fleshed out, but with the hints provided I like where I see this going.
Thanks for sharing!
| Rune Tobor chapter 29 . 6/20
The Marvel Comic Universe is a mess.
Cosmic things like Celestials who should guide seem to arbitralily destroy planets.
Galactus eats planets and they do nothing.
The Shiar once ate a sentient race into extinction!
The Kree and Skrull are not much better.
The ONE ABOVE ALL also seems useless.
Fix it, rip it appart, it is a suitible challenge for two gods.