Reviews for Bellatrix's second chance
Mantygr chapter 43 . 8/27/2023
killing Dumbledore couldn't possibly make the story end badly what a ridiculous excuse seriously as if Dumbledore was in some way important jeeze I should have trusted the reviews and skipped by this nonsense
Mantygr chapter 42 . 8/27/2023
oh well not like games have rules right? what is this trash there are plenty of people who would take action to stop the bludger and not to mention it would just be replaced with a backup one jeeze it's so very unbelievable and ignorant
Mantygr chapter 42 . 8/27/2023
so many wide open plot holes it's worse than Swiss cheese this fic
Mantygr chapter 40 . 8/27/2023
jeeze all this mental illness is easily rectified by tossing anyone with symptoms through the veil and calling it a day
Mantygr chapter 40 . 8/27/2023
so much drama and very little story I hopenwencan more beyond this rinse repeat nonsense
Mantygr chapter 39 . 8/27/2023
this makes no sense once again just drama for the sake of drama
Mantygr chapter 39 . 8/27/2023
Ron's wand got broken but you obviously forgot
setokayba2n chapter 191 . 8/27/2023
I wonder if with all the changes how could be Bellatrix 'Third' chance could go as things are not like normal canon after all and this changed a little compared to the first time the spell happened, if things could go just like here in the second chance or if things could change in the third
Mantygr chapter 29 . 8/27/2023
obvious this is a zero IQ story only complete idiots would think fully trained and evil adults wouldn't capitalize on the first mistake these ignorant children made when thinking they would somehow have a chance when they have no experience or any real skill with real fights against people who would do whatever it takes to win voldemort and Dumbledore must be dumber than a box of rocks in this story which means they would never have made it to where they are now the moment harry and Bella walked in to quirrels office he would kill them and then go steal the stone and leave while dumbest door was busy but no these characters lack even common sense let alone intelligence
Mantygr chapter 9 . 8/26/2023
wtf is going on Ron is a dumb ass why ruin ravenclaws reputation like that. this sorting is a huge bit of nonsense that I hope plays out well but between where everyone was placed and the kids all sharing kisses like they are swingers is inspiring zero confidence that this isn't about to become a huge waste of time to have read
Mantygr chapter 6 . 8/26/2023
they would just test bellas blood if they were curious who she was and now they acknowledge she looks like her and the voldemort connection they would definitely figure it out quickly
Mantygr chapter 5 . 8/26/2023
it's not allowed because the douchebag Dumbledore wants harry to suffer so when he finally shows up in his life he can control him with ease
Mantygr chapter 3 . 8/26/2023
abusive rapist foster parents and they didn't get tortured to death like they should but I'm still hoping the future doesn't let me down.
Deleted User 31e9c22b0a8 chapter 1 . 8/10/2023
Calebros chapter 1 . 7/28/2023
"Now, not only does Harry Potter knows that I'm back"
Did I miss something about you changing what happened or did you forget that Harry had a front row seat to Voldemort's resurrection?
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