Reviews for Of Alchemy and Magic |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, thanks for the story! I think I still found some inconsistency where Umbridge took points from Griffendor when Ed already expelled, and I'm not sure if Harry dreamed about Edward or Sirius, because I'm quite sure it was Edward but when he was in ministry, he was looking for Sirius. And I have to say this story can be polished further, make it smoother. But I'm glad you've finished this story. That's always the best part. Honestly I'm a bit intrigued with the continuation in Harry Potter's parts of the story. So much have changed. Horcurx had come early, and Harry had lost that connection with Voldemort. Can he even defeat Voldemort without it? Anyway, thanks again for the story. Good luck for you author, on your next projects |
![]() ![]() It was а fantastic story. Thank you for it! I don't know much English, but I've read it. And that was cool! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is amazing I just binged read all of it good job |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ed x Hermione xD |
![]() ![]() ![]() So GOOD |
![]() ![]() ![]() Amazing fic. Thank for writing it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I have reread this at least 3 times. Every time I find myself enjoying it more than the last. The characters seemed in character, the explanations were a bit confusing for me to understand but you made it work. Overall 9/10 glad I discovered it now. Definitely one of the best crossovers between FMA and HP |
![]() ![]() ![]() for the love of truth tell me there will be a sequel! |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh my goodness i love this story so much! its amazing! |
![]() ![]() "Yo" Oh my GOD I can't-Why-?! Sorry but that line just destroyed my laughing ability, my Gog I love this |
![]() ![]() ![]() It was a long but nice journey reading here. Thank you so much for this story full of adventure and emotions. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Before I make my exit, I have to say that this was a very well made story, but I did get concerned towards the end when umbridge was in charge(now wouldn't that be the worse case scenario) over all I have to say I fully enjoyed this story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is the first FMA crossover I've completed, and I have to admit, it was really entertaining. Good work! |
![]() ![]() This has been a pleasure to read :) nice work! |
![]() ![]() Just a little thing I've noticed in both this chapter and the one before, you treat Ed as if he's still a student (in the dorm, and Umbrige taking point from Gryffindor) except he's not a student anymore ? IT's not much but yeah dunno if it was voluntary or not. Beside that the fic is really great ! |