|Reviews for Shinji Saotome|
| OmegaUltima chapter 17 . 8/23/2019
Nooooooo! I was so very looking forward to seeing what kind of hell Shinji was going to raise, and even more so when the rest of the Wrecking Crew (Plus Guests) would do! And after you apparently vanished into the aether back about a decade ago, there is pretty much zero chance that you'll ever choose to write a sequel!
*Sigh* well, I suppose I should be used to disappointment in life by now...well, hopefully you are still alive and kicking out there, at least!
| tarrangar chapter 15 . 5/10/2019
I really hate that they are taking Amazon law into the equation, all the more so in this story, as in this story there's not even the justification that Ranma defeated Shampoo in the Amazon village, so it's basically Shampoo walking into a foreign country, and saying her laws trump local laws.
Of course I ideally want Shampoo dead, but I would settle for dishonored, for failing to force Ranma to be her sex slave/husband.
| tarrangar chapter 9 . 5/10/2019
It's worse than just rape what they did, so it's not extreme at all to look at it that way(it's worse than rape, because rape at least only happen once, and you don't have to live with your rapist for the rest of your life, being pressganged into a marriage, mean you will be raped repeatedly, and you have to be around the one who raped you for life, considering Amazon society is Matriarchal, you can add being forced to obey your rapist, so Amazon marriage laws are more or less sex slavery, as well as general slavery)
And of course the one way they have out of it, is entirely on the side of the wife, so Amazon culture is a culture that approve of sex slavery, and as in all slavery, the only legal way to get out of it, is if your master decide to free you.
The Japanese marriage contracts are bad enough, but there you at least need to say yes at the altar, which mean it's ultimately your choice, no one can force you to marry, although your family can take everything they have given you away if you refuse, and being clanless has a huge stigma, but you do at least have some form of choice, whereas with the Amazon's, only the girl get any choice.
As I said Japanese marriage contracts are bad enough, any marriage contract not made by the actual people marrying are, but the Amazon's are worse, both because it's easier to get out of a Japanese marriage contract, and because Japanese marriage contracts, don't force you to move to your wife/husbands place, whereas the Amazon's will drag you back to China.
Although the fact they gave him this out, mean I no longer want those 2 dead, I do want Cologne and Shampoo dead, and apparently Shampoo can't invoke this clause, which mean my opinion on her isn't going to change, as unlike Pepper and Spice, she choose to take actions, meant to force Ranma to become her sex slave with no way out.
| tarrangar chapter 8 . 5/10/2019
Why the fuck is Shinji thanking the bitches, he should be preparing to kill them, or at least cripple them for trying to make him their sex slave(yes beating someone up and forcing them to marry you, is sex slavery as far as I'm concerned)
Okay I know Shinji is too nice for that, but you have portrayed him as getting a spine, and that should mean he wont just go along with their bullshit.
Amazon's need to be killed, crippled or mind-wiped with few exceptions, and none of those we have seen here are said exceptions.
| tarrangar chapter 7 . 5/10/2019
Only good response to Amazon's going husband hunting is murder, kill these bitches in the most agonizing way possible.
Alternatively sick the police on them, they might not be able to arrest them, but they sure as hell can make life complicated for them.
Really hope the Amazon's meet a terrible fate, they are even worse than in canon here, as they are actively trying to trap people in marriage.
| tarrangar chapter 4 . 5/10/2019
Nabiki might feel sympathy, but don't forget that by word of the author, Nabiki and Happosai are the only evil main characters in the story.
| tarrangar chapter 2 . 5/9/2019
Once again I see Amazon's I want to see dead, really hope they get eaten by an angel or something.
| Waka Metalbelly chapter 3 . 9/4/2018
You need an editor. Badly. The plot is interesting but the writing is awful.
| BlazeStryker chapter 7 . 3/16/2018
Regarding #2; Remo Williams knows your pain.
| BlazeStryker chapter 6 . 3/16/2018
The final sample?
If she didn't insist on looking like a loli, she'd probably have an easier time of it!
| Guest chapter 7 . 9/1/2016
It's ok. Your fic that is. I mean, I like cross overs, I like Fix it fics. That's what this is right? A fix it fic. Shinji finds himself in Nerima only to become the catalyst for change. Not just change in a short amount of time but change in general as Ranma 1/2's plot line is fairly stagnant. People and relationships are introduced, yet go no where, we spend dozens upon dozens of chapters watching... Shenanigans for no real resolution. Shinji here lets things progress, becomes the fall guy, the straight man, the voice of reason, and the concious to many hot tempered or dimwitted characters, allowing the story to progress. I enjoy that. The pragmatist in me loves it. See a problem, find solution, fix it, done, move to next problem. However I don't know how much longer this goes on. Ranma is fairly long compared to Eva and this will (probably) eventually culminate in shinji going home only to go fix everything there with new found skills. Physical and emotional and social skills he picked up along the way in pre-impact japan. Helping Asuka, and Rei, and Misato with their grief and other assorted issues... Did I just ruin the ending for myself? Whoops. I just wonder HOW he will get home? Will he have the curse still? who knows? You do, author. And that's why i'll read it. Even though I find your writing boring, an unimaginative retelling of 1/2 Ranma 1/2 Shinji.
| xThomas2 chapter 1 . 12/20/2014
This is pretty cool
| EliteShadow chapter 17 . 4/30/2014
are you going to continue with the next part of this storys series? i would love to know what happens when he gets back and what he does with his knowledge that he learned form ramna and everyone else and i would love to see the reactions of his friends to the curse! lol
please write and new story for this next part?
| Guest chapter 17 . 7/20/2013
That was a very abrupt ending. In fact it barely feels like an ending at all.
| shugokage chapter 17 . 7/3/2013
Interesting story good job!