Reviews for The 13th Tribe - OLD |
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![]() ![]() This older version explained in more detail why Earth's population was drastically reduced. |
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![]() ![]() ![]() may be it is best to delete this one, knowing chapters will not follow |
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![]() ![]() ![]() The question is would the Hebridians join the fight, non of them are purely human so the wraith might not be able to feed on them. Also we have seen that they don't like getting involved with conflicts or they would have done something about the gould. I was also wondering if there is a possibility that the Tollans will make a grand entrance. I don't think they would have all been killed not with that level of technology. |
![]() ![]() ![]() nice i think traveler tech would fit the colonials better than the gould tech or Asgard tech and can also be made a lot faster since they do not use crystal tech. Also traveler tech is more advanced than Gould tech and the traveler's will need those large ships because of their population problem so the colonials have leverage. I think they need to priorities which tech they will use because they can't learn all these different tech at the same time it will only waste time. Also without someone teaching them about Asgard tech it would take years for them to understand it. Remember the Asgard did not think like humans. Btw the Hebridians would not need any of the gould tech because they are already more advanced than the gould remember they beat the gould to get the humans who are now part of their culture. We have only seen their civilian vessels, which were designed to race. Their militery vessels would be the second strongest after earth vessels and they would have a large number of them because they have been around for thousands of years. |
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![]() ![]() ![]() pretty good story just waiting to see where it goes from here. |
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![]() ![]() ![]() The chapter was great but Anubis would not have transferred the Asgard data to this computer core, it would have been kept on tartarus. Though other then that I enjoyed the chapter |
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