Reviews for The Strange Relationship Between Oppai Dragon and Ramen Chef |
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![]() ![]() ![]() As much I have enjoyed this Fic so far, you begun losing me from the alternate dimension point thing. I just dont understand anything anymore and its getting tiring to read. And as much as I like the comedy, I feel like nothing is happening in terms lf story. So im sorry but Im dropping this. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Dertaerg lmaoooo. Great Red bahahaha |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really want to see the ORCs and Kurokas reaction to the videos ith koneko |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great red you say I understand now |
![]() ![]() ![]() Damn you. Damn you for not updating. Damn you for leaving it here right when it was getting really good. Damn you, you horrible yet wonderful authors. |
![]() ![]() ![]() IM LOVING TVISSSSS PLS CONTIMUEEEEEEE |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is the best slice of life/crack fic I've ever read! Absolutely hilarious and well written. I hope you continue |
![]() ![]() ![]() Come back please! |
![]() ![]() ![]() It seems you've made the horrific mistake of 99% of all Naruto/dxd crossovers: you've nerfed Naruto massively for no conceivable reason. It doesn't make sense in-universe, and it doesn't make the plot any better. It just makes the story bad. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh I love this |
![]() ![]() ![]() DxD dont uses seals, they use runes |
![]() ![]() ![]() Kurama is using "..." between sentences too much. Why not try using comma instead? "We are not 'residents' of this plane. It will take a while for it to accept us. Until then, it will try to 'deport' us... I will 'anchor' us here, so that we won't get 'deported'... Don't do anything stupid, I won't be able to drag you out this time... Good luck, Naruto." |
![]() ![]() ![]() is this going to get an update |
![]() ![]() ![]() Madre mia, Issei en que te sentaste? La tarta o el pene, ya sabes acerca de lo sobrenatural, esto sera muy divertido Por favor actualiza esta fantastica historia |
![]() ![]() ![]() Fue muy divertido, espero con ansias el proximo capitulo |