I keep thinking that every Grimm would be keeping a 10 mile radius away from Juan.

I would like to see a jaune that is insanely carismatic
I cant think about a good accent soooooo british?southern? I dont know.
Now this can go many ways
So good at talking that he can tell someone to go to hell and they happly pack for the trip
Could be a VERY shrewd mastermind in secret(could make cinder or salem run for their lien)
Most likely to kill (knows the threat that others posses)
Or a joker (note:the joker is not always funny)(aka dark)(like dc)(oh no)(to many parenthesis)(potato)

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Jaune as an ace pilot with a british accent

hey it's me again I don't know if you'll get this but If you do I made my first fanfiction it's called soul rewrite it's a soul eater fanfiction if you could read it and review it that would mean a lot. good story so far btw.

Hey can you try of jaune being an Irish river dancer in an old classy bar and he just dances after he drinks some good old whiskey. The crowd is just cheering him on. Good luck on the next chapter.

Aww. I was hoping for a ninja Jaune. Or Nin-Jaune? Jaune-nin? Would have been hilarious to see Blake fighting Yang over him.
A gay chef Jaune. Okay.

another idea for jaune.. how bout j'onn manhunter arc! lol
nice chap btw

how bout super luck type next?
or 4thwall breaker?
awesome chap btw!

wow!
wonder if the next jaune surpasses this..

This was really funny at first, but as soon as Juan left, almost all the fun and love in the story left as well. Then again, it was getting a bit much near the end of that as well.
Either way I'm done.

Overall the story was really well done. There were few errors in spelling or grammar, and I laughed quite a bit at the story. It's just it was getting a bit stale, and I didn't like the way the story was starting to go.

Nice chapter and I rather like how Jaune's father meet Blake.

I was honestly wondering when jaune would go fantastic cook now he finally came to beacon. Let's hope ruby,Blake,and Nora don't find out about jean luc because I pity him when they badger him for cookies,fish,and pancakes. Good luck on the next chapter.

wow, this das rally good. in glad you're alive

Well, this was quite the chapter, so, Jaune's father was 'the white fang'...why am I getting a kakashi vibe from this?

And Jaune's mother is Russian? Cool...

And Jaune is now an insane cook, nice!

Looking forward to the next chapter.

dracohalo117

So Ren and Sun hypnotized Jaune into a gay chef?