That was great! I loved every moment.

Reading this, and seeing where RWBY is now canon-wise, it makes me feel like the show itself turned into one long nightmare... literally. This just proves that fanfiction, like yours, is much better, fun, enjoyable, and well thought out. Keep up the good work.

I was sceptical but the duel scene changed my mind completely!

How on Nirn do they know what Spanish is

I'm really hoping their hypnosis is failing and this is Jaune fucking with them all. It'd be great.

it's been a year

This gonna update or naw

please make more chapters

Please update

You're not you when you're hungry, have a Snickers, or if you're like Ruby, have a cookie

Heya buddy just wanted to say that your face are amazing! Hope you update this and stay well!

Merry Christmas by the way!

From your friendly reviwer Akashj

OH MY GOD, I asked for more Penny and you delivered! Out of all the things Penny could've done to inquire about 'love', I did NOT see her creating her own breast implants. Goddamn that was hilarious!

Damn, so we've got Emmy throwing her hat into the mix now too? Heh, dude works fast...

Nice to see more Penny in this fic as well! I really hope she comes back into the fray more directly in future chapters!

Jago is fucking awesome, there I said it!

I was honestly kinda upset that you didn't have Johann stick around for longer, cmon man, why can't our lovable android loli get some love too?

PENNY NEEDS LOVE TOO.

This had me laughing so much, but that ending killed me dead...

Poor Yang, the guy she falls in love with is gone, guess I'll miss Juan too I suppose.

Spool does yang still like juan or is that romance dead.

After all she did put herself in harms way to prove she was worthy of courting juan(e)