Reviews for Hypnotherapy
Dust2Dust17 chapter 1 . 1/15/2015
You had me at "Captain Underpants".
Fourze chapter 5 . 1/14/2015
The fight scene didn't sit well the second half of the chapter.
garoorar chapter 5 . 1/14/2015
Ruby is too cute in this fic.
Noob6 chapter 5 . 1/14/2015
lol, poor ruby got duped...even glynda cannot resist the juan!
Silent soviet chapter 4 . 1/11/2015
I like the story, but it infuriates me that Pyrrha and ren are put down by the glares. The last time I recieved a glare for making someone mad, I threatened to rip their throat out with my teeth and bathe in the bile and blood. Of course, I was a little mad that day, but still, a bit of aggressiveness towards the horde would be nice
Unicorns chapter 4 . 1/11/2015
I thought the argument that Ruby and Blake had was funny. X3 And I don't mind Arkos at on making new chapters! :)
sUbSoNiCSoundwave chapter 4 . 1/12/2015
Corny but hilarious. I'm loving it! XD

If you want an idea to spice things up, you could have Pyrrha try to dampen his behavior by changing him from a confident ladies man, but accidentally turn him into a raging psycho that's hooked on meth and just goes around beating the living hell out of everyone that looks at him funny Trevor Phillips style. That would be hilarious and terrifying, and Jaune would end up going by the name Johnny. XD
Electric Eclectic chapter 4 . 1/11/2015
I guess you could say that their love for him is going in...Juan direction!
Utoplex chapter 4 . 1/11/2015
I'm so glad I found this story.
The funniest and bizzare transformation of Jaune I have ever seen in all my reading of fan fictions.

Great writing and dialogue between characters, just simply amazing.

Hoping to see another spectacular chapter soon. Keep up the great work.
Benthino chapter 4 . 1/11/2015
I am pleased to see this chapter up and look forward to the next one. Keep up the good work compadre!
Le MAO chapter 4 . 1/11/2015
Wow...I never thought I'd see the day that Yang would be delusional, but here it is. I believe I am justified in making the following statement...




...anyway, no idea who Murphy is. Other than that, can't wait to see what happens during the rest of this "Juan week".


...oh yeah, one more thing. I side with Ruby on this. CAPTAIN UNDERPANTS ALL THE WAY!
Ranger Station Charlie chapter 4 . 1/11/2015
Juane broke the system
NewJesus chapter 4 . 1/11/2015
Absolutely Hilarious
Nerel chapter 2 . 1/6/2015
Wonderful story :)
Just one small detail it's not "Mi llamo...' but "Me llamo..." Trust me, I'm Spanish XD
Nik41 chapter 3 . 1/6/2015
Forget it its solved
Silly PC...
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