Reviews for Hypnotherapy |
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![]() ![]() Forget it its solved Silly PC... |
![]() ![]() seeing a trouble... Its the first chapter. plz resolution quickly |
![]() ![]() ![]() So. Genius. All that's needed now is a good ol' fashioned captain underpants villain! :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ruby and Pyrrha having so perfect and funny conversations as it should stay. I knew this would happen. Thought it's kind of sad when you think it this way: Ruby is more than ready to throw Jaune away and replace him with a cooler version of Jaune. I know she's being naive but that would still hurt the real Jaune pretty badly if you ask me. Actually, that topic should be touched at some point in this fanfic, especially if it turns out that Juan becomes Jaune again by accident and not by choice of Ruby who made the spell. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ok. I wasn't expecting Juan but when I read the title, I knew perfectly what was gonna happen and I loved it. Although the part where he flirts with Pyrrha was a surprise (thought he'll do that with every woman so he'll go for Yang first) but when I thought about it after finishing it, seems pretty accurate. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved reading Captain Underpants as a kid. This story is perfect. Everything about it is funny. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh man I busted out laughing when I read the Juan part of the story. Reminds me of some discussions on SB about Jaunes cousin Juan lol. Wonderfully done. Is he inspired by Gomez Addams by the way because I could definitely see him in there. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Juan Arc is awesome! |
![]() ![]() ![]() A new chapter? ...This pleases me. |
![]() ![]() An Arc with a different personality would be interesting one. :3 |
![]() ![]() ![]() Am I the only one who visualized Jaune with a spanish accent every time he spoke? This is just too good! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh man! Stuttering/flustered Pyrrha is best Pyrrha. And "Juan" Arc, hilarious. I love the cheesy spanglish. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm so betting on Juan is getting popular really quickly next chapter and pyrrha is getting jealous quite fast while Ruby is getting pyrrha to accept it but Ruby also wonders if THAT THE JAUNE THEY KNEW awesome job on this chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() Leave it to Port to see something of himself in Juan. Now To Combat! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Today it's Juan, tommorow it will be Jeane. How about it? it will be funny to get jaune into all that character |