Reviews for Hypnotherapy |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Nice. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I laugh a lot when Ozpin asked Glynda about her size, and laugh more when she gives to him her answer. |
![]() ![]() ![]() HAHAHA! WONDERFUL! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great laugh at the girls' interactions with the Arc family, especially with the mother. His sister seems to be attacking along a different route. Should be fun, until Jaune gets his proper mind back... or at last learn to manage all the new guys in his head. Then it will be Embarrassment City, with him as the mayor. Population: fluid. Until next time. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Finally! your back! And the finally met one of his sisters! and i wonder how the restaurants going to go. But more importantly. I want an Bro-Con to appear! |
![]() ![]() ![]() MORE MORE MOREEE! |
![]() ![]() ![]() The best of luck. Hope to hear from you soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() What was changed. I got an update from the fanfiction app. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Why? |
![]() ![]() I havent given up on this. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Happy to see this updated again, hope the job hunting's been going well! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This chapter was really good, despite the fact it was a way to bridge over to the next one the emotions and getting hooked to it is enough to prove its worth. And it truly did those characters building you intended to make with it. With this chapter only, Blake and Jonas' characters underwent a growth that surpassed what the ones before did. And by a long shot. Which truthfully surprised me, by the way. When I started to read this great story, the only characters development I've expected to see was Jaune, Pyrrha and Ruby, as indicated in the characters in the summary. And oh boy was I glad to see I was completely wrong. Blake and Jonas are but a part, counting Yang and Emerald, which I was totally baffled about, and many more you've surpassed my expectations. Adding the great comedy, I've surprised myself and my entourage to laugh at Juan's antics, and the storytelling this story is incredible in my honest opinion. I'm awaiting impatiently the next chapter. Keep up the good job ! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really hope the next one is a super serious knight or something. |
![]() ![]() ![]() CPR is not a kiss. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I almost expected a JuanDiego Montoya persona. Whipping out deagles and popping caps in foe ass to avenge his 'brother' I totally didn't get this idea from a certain reddit post about Juan Deag.. |