Reviews for The Fall
rebecca's mom chapter 30 . 9/15
I enjoyed your story very much. The character development was wonderful. Thank you for their happily ever after and a very engaging story! xox
Debs chapter 30 . 9/1
So,so loved this story and would like to know more about Edward. What happened to make him view himself so undeserving of bella? Where is his family? You give such depth to the characters without a lot of details. Just leaves us wanting more. Thanks for writing and would love to know if u are still writing and where I could find your work.
pauleen chapter 30 . 7/19
Thank you. I enjoyed from beginning to end.
pauleen chapter 26 . 7/19
Good riddance. Great chapter.
pauleen chapter 25 . 7/19
What the? ?
pauleen chapter 23 . 7/19
I am loving how you tell this story. Things are and have been heating up. This some good stuff.
pauleen chapter 18 . 7/19
What a chapter. An emotional roller roller coaster. Loved Edward showing up at the club.
pauleen chapter 15 . 7/18
That was a sexy chapter. Loved it.
pauleen chapter 14 . 7/18
This goooood. I'm loving it.
pauleen chapter 12 . 7/18
The both like each other. But the need to be careful is big. I know what Edward had to "pick up from work."
pauleen chapter 11 . 7/18
I knew he would turn to her sooner than later. The preasure is on. What scams.
pauleen chapter 5 . 7/18
I am see that this girl can't catch a break. I like that she approached him to say her thanks.
I am liking this story very much. It's now on my favorites lists.
pauleen chapter 4 . 7/18
The ending was intense. I wonder how Edward handled them. I might like him.
pauleen chapter 2 . 7/17
I am loving this so far.
emmettandme chapter 27 . 7/6
:) :) :)
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