|Reviews for The Fall|
| Messy Bronze Hair chapter 31 . 8/26/2022
This was a really good story, but I wished for more details. I feel like we were left with so many dead ends. What happened to the girls that disappeared from the club, specially Tanya/Tania? What exactly were Edward and Jasper involved in? Cause up until the point it was mentioned that there was an arrest warrant out for Edward, I thought that he was an undercover CIA agent. Who was Marcus, really? And why was he so powerful? What happened to basically everyone after Bella made her escape from her “shit hole apartment”? And finally, where was Edward during all these time when he was away from Bella?
And there is probably more that I would like to know!
But thank you for a really catching story!
Messy Bronze Hair
| JaysWorld2 chapter 30 . 8/11/2022
I just came back to fanfiction a couple months ago after too many years away. According to my history, I've devouvered 170 stories so far. This is top 3. Maybe #1. I'm not good at writing reviews, but I couldn't let this go. Your story is amazing. The only thing "wrong" is that it ended. I want it to go on forever. Your characters are amazing and the writing, the plot, just everything is so well developed and flowing. It's relatively short, but it doesn't need to have longer descriptions or in-between action or embellishment. The story is complete the way it is.
I want to forget I read it, just so I can read it again and again with new eyes. So thank you for your story. I'd buy your writing in a heartbeat if you ever publish a book.
| Elle Whitecap chapter 30 . 2/11/2022
I love the rawness of this fox.
| Guest chapter 28 . 1/25/2022
It's LOSING, not LOOSING. (smh)
| UntitledEnder chapter 31 . 1/18/2022
God this was such a good read. I didn’t want this to end and I sat here and read it all in one go, with no restraint whatsoever. 10/10. This Edward is amazing. Same for Bella. You’re a great writer. The world you built was so gritty, real, steamy.
| TheFenrisWulf chapter 30 . 11/12/2021
Your story is so intense it’s suffocating and i loved every minute of it. Unique, scarily accurate and dark.
| Pattigirl23 chapter 1 . 9/5/2021
Wow! What a beautiful story... You're an amazing writer. Thank you for sharing
| blb1000 chapter 30 . 8/20/2021
Daddy Edward is so sweet.
| blb1000 chapter 29 . 8/20/2021
I knew he'd show up eventually. Thank you for this teasing tale!
| blb1000 chapter 28 . 8/19/2021
I'm guessing he knows where Jasper's family lives.
| blb1000 chapter 27 . 8/19/2021
I hope she goes to a place like Forks, where it's safe and $30k will buy a lot.
| blb1000 chapter 26 . 8/19/2021
Whoa. That's some chapter. Marcus got what was coming...
| blb1000 chapter 24 . 8/19/2021
Damn. That IS a lot to ask of her. Jasper could start looking for Tania & Sam's bones too.
| blb1000 chapter 23 . 8/18/2021
As if she has another option.
| blb1000 chapter 22 . 8/18/2021
I'm guessing Alice may kill herself before she ever gets to meet Jasper.