This was a really good story, but I wished for more details. I feel like we were left with so many dead ends. What happened to the girls that disappeared from the club, specially Tanya/Tania? What exactly were Edward and Jasper involved in? Cause up until the point it was mentioned that there was an arrest warrant out for Edward, I thought that he was an undercover CIA agent. Who was Marcus, really? And why was he so powerful? What happened to basically everyone after Bella made her escape from her “shit hole apartment”? And finally, where was Edward during all these time when he was away from Bella?

And there is probably more that I would like to know!

But thank you for a really catching story!

Love,
Messy Bronze Hair

I just came back to fanfiction a couple months ago after too many years away. According to my history, I've devouvered 170 stories so far. This is top 3. Maybe #1. I'm not good at writing reviews, but I couldn't let this go. Your story is amazing. The only thing "wrong" is that it ended. I want it to go on forever. Your characters are amazing and the writing, the plot, just everything is so well developed and flowing. It's relatively short, but it doesn't need to have longer descriptions or in-between action or embellishment. The story is complete the way it is.
I want to forget I read it, just so I can read it again and again with new eyes. So thank you for your story. I'd buy your writing in a heartbeat if you ever publish a book.

I love the rawness of this fox.

It's LOSING, not LOOSING. (smh)

God this was such a good read. I didn’t want this to end and I sat here and read it all in one go, with no restraint whatsoever. 10/10. This Edward is amazing. Same for Bella. You’re a great writer. The world you built was so gritty, real, steamy.

Your story is so intense it’s suffocating and i loved every minute of it. Unique, scarily accurate and dark.

Wow! What a beautiful story... You're an amazing writer. Thank you for sharing

Daddy Edward is so sweet.

I knew he'd show up eventually. Thank you for this teasing tale!

I'm guessing he knows where Jasper's family lives.

I hope she goes to a place like Forks, where it's safe and $30k will buy a lot.

Whoa. That's some chapter. Marcus got what was coming...

Damn. That IS a lot to ask of her. Jasper could start looking for Tania & Sam's bones too.

As if she has another option.

I'm guessing Alice may kill herself before she ever gets to meet Jasper.