Reviews for The Fall
Taylor9901 chapter 4 . 1/21/2015
I'm dying for more.
KTNCullen chapter 4 . 1/21/2015
Oh God, this poor girl! Thank God he showed up when he did! I do love though, that this Bella was so contented and happy while they were at the playground - appreciating moments with her baby. She's a good girl. I hope Edward can help her and Emmett out of this rut somehow.
Lovin this story, girl!
Maplestyle chapter 4 . 1/21/2015
I hope Edward waited until they were in the building then he kicked all their asses! Can't wait for more!
2muchtrouble chapter 4 . 1/21/2015
So Edward is not the baby daddy for Emmett. She knew his name so how does she know him?
SLKerouac chapter 3 . 1/21/2015
Bella heads off to work only to be a little late. Marcus lets her know that he is watching. She does her job and when it was time to leave her pay was shorter than what she knew it to be. She asked Marcus about it and it did not go well. He was letting her know that she could make more if she would sell his drugs. Bella told him that would not happen. She took her money and went to pick up her son. She got to their apartment and got Emmett into bed with her following. Bella had nothing to d the next day. She could spend it with her son. What happens? Does something happen with Bella and Emmett? Who was in the black car? Is Bella being watched? Does someone come after her? Will Emmett or Bella be hurt? Next chapter!
Chicsarah chapter 3 . 1/21/2015
Bella is so strong, but I hope Edward is the kind of man she can lean on.
flyrbrd chapter 3 . 1/19/2015
christykq chapter 3 . 1/19/2015
I'm wondering what Bella did in the private room? Your characters are very intriguing. I want to know more about Alice and the other people in the club. I'm thinking that Edward is an undercover cop and he's going to need Bella to bring Marcus down... hmm... Undercoverward? Yes, please!

Great story. Great chapter. Update quickly.
thimbles chapter 3 . 1/19/2015
I'm feeling like Marcus may no longer consider not "pulling her weight" an option soon.

The description of the way she stripped off Bella and put on Rose was great. The contrast, that as she bares her skin, she hides away her self.

Great job, girly.

Shell x
Moflo19 chapter 3 . 1/18/2015
I love Bella describing how she feels to escape into her "Rose" persona. That Marcus is a CREEP. I'm completely hooked by this story.
Moflo19 chapter 2 . 1/18/2015
I really FEEL for this Bella who's just trying to provide for her son any way she can. I'm anxious to find out why she's alone...
Moflo19 chapter 1 . 1/18/2015
That surreal moment when you see someone you know in a strip club...
archy12 chapter 3 . 1/18/2015
Bella's life is hard, but she still found a silver lining in it-feeling powerful, if only for a humans try to find a semblance of happiness in the dreariest of situations!
Luvvykitty chapter 3 . 1/18/2015
Interesting twist, curious to see where this goes.
Wheels2 chapter 3 . 1/17/2015
Loved it.
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