Reviews for The Fall |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Not easy being a single mom. |
![]() ![]() ![]() What is so happening there. He likes the blonde on stage. He has these feelings but has to leave. Where does he go? Why? What is going to change his life? Next chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() There's no 'next' button! Why is there no 'next' button? I need moooorrrreeee! Such an intriguing start, seriously cannot wait for more. Thank you, lovely :-) Erron xoxo |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is very intriguing and I can not wait to see what happens next. The possibilities are endless... do they know each other? Is Edward in the mob? Is he undercover? I'm assuming that's Bella on stage but there's no indication of that except for his reaction to her. Could the girl be Rose? Anyway, update quickly. I'm dying to see where you take this. Great chapter. Great story so far. Lots of potential. |
![]() ![]() ![]() interesting start. wonder where this story is going |
![]() ![]() ![]() sounds interesting, can't wait to read more! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ohhh! so happy for a new story :-) can't wait to read more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Excited to read along :) your the tits Wink. Xx |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sheesh, you've got me so intrigued. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like how this is written. Interesting start. Looking forward to more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm afraid. Thanks! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very well written. And very intriguing... Ficsister write about you. Thank you for sharing. |
![]() ![]() Great first chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm hooked! I can't wait for your next update! Happy new year! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oooooooooo...Very intriguing! I'm in! Thank you! Katy |