|Reviews for Legend of Zelda: Revelations of the Twilight Realm|
| ThinMintE chapter 10 . 4/15/2019
Just so you know, chapter 10 is for your Pokémon fanfic. You accidentally posted the wrong chapter there.
| Lady Selan chapter 1 . 2/18/2019
So far I've only had time to read the first chapter. I think your story has some potential and I'm interested to see where it goes. I like seeing Link, Zelda and Midna all interact together, and I think you're setting up an interesting premise for the plot.
That being said, I really think (based on my first impression) that your story would benefit from having a beta reader or fresh set of eyes look over it. There are several grammatical and sentence structure errors which are a bit off-putting as I'm only into your first chapter. I think if you fix those then you could potentially have a great fic.
These are just my suggestions of course, and all I can say is keep writing and practicing. There is not a single person on here who doesn't have areas to improve on. Best of luck!
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/10/2016
Wow! 6 chapters, 13,903 words, and 1 review? Damn, you suck so bad!
| Guest chapter 3 . 7/10/2016
Wrong story, dumbass!
| Finvarra Faerie chapter 1 . 1/2/2015
I thought this was good. It's interesting. I'm looking forward to seeing the rest. Good job on this, writer.