One of the most original and touching stories I've read in a really long time. I cried and hurt for this Edward and Bella. I laughed until I peed at the "gadgets gone wrong" stories. Thank you and Mr Maxi for creating this very special fic.

Wow... been wondering who else was in there with him. You didn't disappoint!

This story is keeping me up while I should be sleeping! Gah! So fucking original! Love how much Emmett cares. Love this Edward and hope he can heal.

Very good story, with masculine touches. So thank you, Maxi and especially, Mr. Maxi.

Omg, this plot is absolutely amazing! So painful sometimes, so sad, so interesting and keeping me on my toes!. Thanks so much for sharing this.
My favorite thing will always be how much Emmett really loves Edward. It's like they're brothers. I've been wondering what was it like for Emmet when he first started working for Edward, getting to know him and start to really appreciate him.
Thanks again!
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I think Bella knows the gist of the story and she probably is blaming herself the same as Edward. It was her boyfriend who went after Edward out of jealousy and ended up killing her dad. She brought him into their lives.

Wow! I never had read this story before, but I’m glad I found it.

Bella did choose to date Jake but technically Tanya brought him into their lives. I don’t recall if Emmett had divulged that information, that Tanya had actually paid Jake to peruse Bella.
Jake was certifiable, I can’t believe he thought they could go home and just go on with their lives after everything.

It doesn’t sound like there was enough evidence to take Emmett in, he didn’t have to go.

My guess is that it is either Jake or Tanya who killed Charlie.
Jake maybe was going after Edward and Charlie protected him, than maybe tanya stepped in with a deal to save her cash cow that she would handle Edward and he would handle Bella. He could have been going after both of them, maybe Charlie didn’t want Jake with Bella.
Tanya could have been stealing from Edward before Charlie died and was going to be fired, maybe she flipped.
The Jake angle sounds more logical.

I want outtakes where Emmet tells Edward all about the failed gadgets James made of course how parenthood is for Bella and Edward, if their daughter will turn into a mad scientist ;). And everyone expanding the family with kids and all the shenanigans :)

That could’ve ended badly because they waited and waited to talk about it. Luckily they got over it and it went well. Even the frantic marry me girder out well;)

Edward is finally able to shake the ghost he’s been varying around for 5 years, poor him. But now with closure they can work it out and live HEA!

Yeah, no escape from his mind this time. Rupert and James are gone. James might come back when Edward is in character… maybe ;). And now for everyone to talk about the shooting and what Edward remembers about that day when Charlie was murdered.

Phew, everyone made it, well, not John, but a headwound is usually fatal. And Bella thought that Edward was dead, someone could’ve told her he was in surgery at least!