Reviews for Shadow Mission |
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archy12 chapter 5 . 2/22/2017 Shudder. Well, at least this Rupert guy is not abusive or violent. But it was definitely very creepy. Poor Edward. |
archy12 chapter 4 . 2/22/2017 This is getting curioser and curioser! I am probably wrong, but it seems to me that Tanya might have had something to do with Charlie's death. She has to be a greedy, selfish person to keep Edward's parents away from him, and Bella too of course, just because he might not be able to earn the kind of money he is earning now. Or maybe she really wants to protect him and this is the only way she knows? |
archy12 chapter 3 . 2/22/2017 Oh, so Edward began having this problem when Charlie died. Must have been something he really wants to forget. Ha, that would make us category B, I suppose. Maybe Bella will be the key to the mystery. |
archy12 chapter 2 . 2/22/2017 Nice intro to Jasper and Bella. He sounds a real professional and she very sad. (Even though Bella hanging from a tree branch made me laugh.) Edward being a shy, unassuming guy reminds me of a short story I read once-Who am I today? Except that that guy was able to leave his character behind when he left the stage, and he wasn't this famous. :) |
archy12 chapter 1 . 2/22/2017 That is a very interesting and very unusual premise. I didn't think Edward would be his movie character, more like he had split personality disorder. Fascinating! |
midnitereader chapter 25 . 2/22/2017 Wow, what an emotional roller coaster. Poor Edward hiding in his mind so the memories of what happened that fateful day won't be there to haunt him. But the nightmares let him know his mind hasn't forgotten. He went so far on his journey to become normal and sane again. And along the way he reconnected with Bella and they traveled the road together. She always wondered and when the story finally came out, as wrapped up as she was in her grief she was there for Edward to help him through it. I must admit I liked his alter egos James and Rupert. Even thought James was mildly condescending and his inventions were a bust, the results were amusing. And the randy Rupert, that lecherous man. His dialogue, though rude, I found hilarious. I'm glad Edward and Emmett remained friends. I liked how Emmett watched over Edward and kept him safe. And though Bella lost her last remaining family when her daddy died she gained so much more when she persisted in finding out the truth. She gained a family of friends that cared for her too. |
mo kagen chapter 25 . 2/20/2017 Thank you! |
mo kagen chapter 24 . 2/20/2017 (: |
jeanine0963 chapter 25 . 2/20/2017 I wish this was a series. These characters i could get used to reading often. I really enjoy "Emmett". Your twists and turns of your storyline kept me reading until the end. |
robela chapter 25 . 2/19/2017 Thank you! |
GorGirl chapter 1 . 2/19/2017 So, Edward is a nut job? |
tired617 chapter 25 . 2/18/2017 Great story. Enjoyed reading it |
Guest chapter 25 . 2/17/2017 Wow |
twimomof4 chapter 25 . 2/17/2017 I LOVED this! It was so original and I couldn't stop reading. |
aussietwilight chapter 25 . 2/17/2017 Fantastic story. Really, Really enjoyed reading it. Very original. Thank you for sharing your talent! |