Awww, Edward is coming back more and more.
And he now dares to voice his fears about missing days, his headaches and bruises. He’s taken a small step towards recovery. And soon he’ll be talking to Rose and everything he has repressed will come back.

Tanya will soon be kicked to the curb ;)

Hmmm, If it was Tanya, she’d know that Bella was at the house… maybe Bella’s ex husband?..

And good thing the hedge broke Edwards fall, “James” the moron glued the camera in wrong, not really stealth if the flash is on XD. And Tanya’s gravy train has left the station * choo choo*

Jasper and Alice would be able to get all the dirt on Tanya ;).
Bet she is into some shady things. And she covered up what happened to Charlie. And Bella could settle Edward without a problem, she will be back soon ;).

Now I wonder if they can kick Tanya to the curb and cut Edward loose from the contract ;)

Poor Bella, getting acquainted with the perverted Rupert.
So Edward got so stressed he checked out and Rupert checked in.
Emmet coulda warned Bella about that!.
And Rose must’ve met him at some point?

Awww, “James” little experiment blew up in his face XD.
And Edward went right back to “James” after the nap.
And he’s staying longer and longer as “James”.
Maybe his James persona is protecting him from remembering what happened with Charlie. And Edward was there when Charlie was murdered and Tanya covered it up.

And Tanya is a fucking bitch for keeping Edward from his parents! How money hungry must you be to put them on the threat list?!. And they’ve been trying for 5 years to see their son. And Emmet has been sending them away, not knowing they are his parents… I feel so bad for Emmet now.

And I do wonder how long Bella have tried to contact Edward thru Tanya.

Yeah, that went to hell in a hand basket, fast.
It was a huge red flag for “James” when Rose mentioned Charlie Swan. Was Charlie the bodyguard before Emmet?.
Or did Edward work with Charlie?, and how well did Edward know Bella?

Hmm, I do wonder if Tanya know who Bella is, and what happened to Charlie… I mean, I she knew, she probably wouldn’t ignore her. Unless she told Edward and Edward said no.

Poor Bella, swinging upside down from a three, like a piñata XD

Awww, Poor Edward, not being able to tell his character from reality. But Emmet has his back!

This is my third time reading this story. Love it. This time I’m listening to it using Google “read aloud”. Making housework a breeze.

Great story
Thank you

Probably a repeated comment. I love the story, but I’m a Florida resident, and having a generator in a bunker means dead characters. And I’ll-informed new residents to a generator state. Laura

You did a lot of research on this .l am so impressed with your writing. You got mad skills girl !

Wow. Just...Wow. That was so awesome. I love some of the subtleties. Like, Edward did not have a POV for some time, he lost his voice when he lost time. Not to mention how shy and just so damn unsure of everything he is in the beginning. I loved the uniqueness of this tale. Thank you so much for sharing this story!

Fabulously unique! I loved it!

Absolutely loved this story from the beginning to the end. This last chapter had me laughing so much! I look forward to rereading this one day!