Reviews for Protective Custody |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Just delightful! Especially the last paragraph. I giggled a lot at that. So glad the one shot turned to three! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wonderful story, thank you! You are adored and appreciated! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I tend to read and re-read the epics, as my obsessive personality just doesn't like things to end, which is a shame because I forgot how excellent this short story is. Also, in general your word choice is superb. You manage to convey a wealth of meaning and information in small snippets of phrase. Love Neville in this and even Ron. You are adored and appreciated! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I think I'd be fine if Draco wanted to call me "mistress." Who am I to take the moral high ground when faced with his insistence? I enjoyed this. You are adored and appreciated! |
![]() ![]() ![]() fucking incredible! Narcissa is probably my favourite character, no joke, she is awesome and also terrifying, but awesome! i just love the whole story tbh |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this Narcissa... |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was even more entertaining the second time I read it. |
![]() ![]() LOLZ |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved the whole story to be honest. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow. That ending though. (The proposal part and the Narcissa part). Loved me both! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() amazing and funny story. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Narcissa is literally amazing in anything you write. I never knew I would love her so much, and her love for her son is so terrifying and so heartwarming (but mostly really terrifying). Thanks for another fun adventure! That last line had me dying. |
![]() ![]() ![]() MY HEART AT THAT LAST SCENE I'M CLUTCHING MY CHEST IT'S JUST TOO PURE AND BEAUTIFUL. |
![]() ![]() ![]() You set the bar so high for Dramione fanfic. Like forreal, I skimmed through a couple others to try to find something interesting and just ended back on your account and picking several of your creations instead, bahaha. Dialogue here is crisp; scene changes are so strong here, and never feel out of place or weirdly transitioned. Umbridge is as hateful as ever, and I love that Draco doesn't do grand gestures to save people, but little things like bringing all the attention to himself in the detention center. He's got a great heart! Awesome ending scene, too; the last line is too funny. |