I can't believe that I didn't read this one until now. It's absolutely brilliant! xoxo

Love this you have made my day with this beautifully written story

The Ende is awsome.

I almost didn't read the very last sentence. I'm incredibly happy I did read it. While I love your darker stories, it's refreshing to read one of your lighter, short stories. Thank you for writing a story for every mood.

Amazing work...would it be too much to ask that you write a much lengthier version with a similar plot

Lol. Great story!

This is beyond fabulous. Love it

Glad that you turned it into a three-shot! Masterful writing - I enjoyed your parallel depictions of Narcissa and Hermione. Awesome story!

Simply amazing 3

I'm addicted to this story!

You are so good at creating alternate worlds for the Harry Potter Universe. You are a queen.

Awww...super adorable! That last part made me laugh like crazy though! I really enjoyed this and was honored to be able to read your wonderful writing! :)

As I was reading this chapter (especially that awesome ending scene), I kept hearing the theme music of the Lord of the Rings in my head. I love your characterizations of all the characters and your writing! Looking forward to the next chapter! :)

This is an amazing idea! I'm really looking forward to the rest of this story! :)

I laughed at the ending. Wonderful read!