Reviews for Protective Custody |
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![]() ![]() ![]() This was very satisfying to read. Loved it, and especially loved how you portrayed Narcissa... She's a bonafide badass! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Fascinating story. Not fond of Kingsley Shacklebolt being the bad guy (just can't see him having it in him) but... :shrugs: not my fanfiction. Loved the low-death-tally coup. Awesome. Thanks for writing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hahaha this story is amazing! Narcissa is great! :) |
![]() ![]() Kingsley Shacklebolt is so gullible! Of course Narcissa would kill him! Three down! BEST ENDING EFVER! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved it :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Absolutely wonderful. I very much enjoyed reading this story. Thank you for writing and sharing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() That last part. Girl, that is what had me. Imma read your other stories now. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I think that was the best ending sentence of a fan fiction that I have ever read. Not to mention the story itself was just beautiful and charming all at the same time. I could read this story as often as a person would drink water, so thank you for writing such a fantastic story. |
![]() ![]() I honestly liked this story a lot until the 3rd chapter. The plot is good, I really enjoyed the writing and the characters were believable. But then, too me, Hermione drastically fell out of character. I can't believe she would be ok with people being killed during the coup when they could easily have been arrested. Never would she stand aside to let so be tortured! And I feel that you characterised her differently as well - not standing for any wrong.. I'm sorry to criticise, but I needed this off my chest, especially since it was so good until that point.. |
![]() ![]() I think I basically died and cried and just... Overall was overwhelmed by this story. It was so amazing. I can't wait to see your future as a writer, you have amazing potential. |
![]() ![]() I love all of your stories that I have read and I can't wait for future one |
![]() ![]() ![]() My favorite part was Luna and Blaise at the depart. of ministries. Shacklebolt's speech was a hoot. |
![]() ![]() ![]() The children's crusade sounds fun. Would like to hear more detail re what Draco did in custody. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Umbridge gave me the shivers. Yuck. I love how they find out things about each other even though they don't talk much. |
![]() ![]() "Brightest witch of our age, right answers is what I do" BEST FIC EVER! |