Reviews for Protective Custody |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I love your writing style. You leave things out so eloquently! Instead of plodding through mundane story points, you leave a mystery to solve in each conversation & make the story interactive. How are you not the most popular writer on this website? You are brilliant! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well of course at least one more.. You can't stop now! Not with your talent for political stories! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Tis was so good! I loved the chapter-and their little revolution. |
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![]() ![]() This is amazing! It just went on my list of fanfics to show people when they ask me why dramione is my otp. And trust me, there are a lot of reasons. You just added a lot more with your amazing writing, so thank you :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Such a fresh idea for a story and so well written! What else can one wish for? :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() There are no words to express how much I love this. No words. This is probably one of the most compelling plots I've come across in awhile (so I'm sad it'll only be three chapters.) Seriously, awesome job on this. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This added so much more depth to your story! I love it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() EEEEEE! SO as soon as I replied to your PM I checked it and saw that you'd updated (why am I not following?!) and yeah. LOVE. IT. I just love Narcissa, and your Narcissa is perfect. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Definitely an enhancement. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yet another great chapter! Really hoping for a third, so crossing my fingers. Also hoping that Draco ends up happy. Preferably with Hermione. Can't help but worry a tad about th "angst" category. XD Although it could be argued that Draco's treatment (and his attitude) in the center caused much of it... but I digress lol |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter. Can't imagine anything better than two ruthless scheming women & I have no doubt that Ginny & Luna, & eventually Pansy & possibly Lavender will join in the fun. The boys just need to sit back & do the occasional bit of heavy lifting (oh, & do as they're told). Also liked Neville's friendship speech. |
![]() ![]() ![]() well now you will have to write more to tell us how this tale ended...I hope it ends in a wedding... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Amazingly happy you decided to continue this story! This is a great follow up to the first chapter and I look forward to reading more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() oooohhh revolution love it thanks more pretty please |