Reviews for Protective Custody
FyreQuill chapter 2 . 1/6/2015
I love your writing style. You leave things out so eloquently! Instead of plodding through mundane story points, you leave a mystery to solve in each conversation & make the story interactive. How are you not the most popular writer on this website? You are brilliant!
Stefartemis chapter 2 . 1/6/2015
Well of course at least one more.. You can't stop now! Not with your talent for political stories!
aeireis chapter 2 . 1/6/2015
Tis was so good! I loved the chapter-and their little revolution.
haitt chapter 2 . 1/5/2015
Nice!
Guest chapter 2 . 1/5/2015
This is amazing! It just went on my list of fanfics to show people when they ask me why dramione is my otp. And trust me, there are a lot of reasons. You just added a lot more with your amazing writing, so thank you :)
Silencebeyondthestars chapter 2 . 1/5/2015
Such a fresh idea for a story and so well written! What else can one wish for? :)
Vox Humana chapter 2 . 1/5/2015
There are no words to express how much I love this. No words. This is probably one of the most compelling plots I've come across in awhile (so I'm sad it'll only be three chapters.) Seriously, awesome job on this.
anon5082120511 chapter 2 . 1/5/2015
This added so much more depth to your story! I love it!
Brightki chapter 2 . 1/5/2015
EEEEEE! SO as soon as I replied to your PM I checked it and saw that you'd updated (why am I not following?!) and yeah. LOVE. IT. I just love Narcissa, and your Narcissa is perfect.
chibi moon baby chapter 2 . 1/5/2015
Definitely an enhancement. :)
starlitflora chapter 2 . 1/5/2015
Yet another great chapter! Really hoping for a third, so crossing my fingers. Also hoping that Draco ends up happy. Preferably with Hermione. Can't help but worry a tad about th "angst" category. XD Although it could be argued that Draco's treatment (and his attitude) in the center caused much of it... but I digress lol
Grovek26 chapter 2 . 1/5/2015
Great chapter. Can't imagine anything better than two ruthless scheming women & I have no doubt that Ginny & Luna, & eventually Pansy & possibly Lavender will join in the fun. The boys just need to sit back & do the occasional bit of heavy lifting (oh, & do as they're told). Also liked Neville's friendship speech.
viola1701e chapter 2 . 1/5/2015
well now you will have to write more to tell us how this tale ended...I hope it ends in a wedding...
LadiePhoenix007 chapter 2 . 1/5/2015
Amazingly happy you decided to continue this story! This is a great follow up to the first chapter and I look forward to reading more.
General Mac chapter 2 . 1/5/2015
oooohhh revolution love it thanks more pretty please
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