Reviews for Protective Custody |
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![]() ![]() ![]() reallllll good |
![]() ![]() ![]() I can't wait for the rest! |
![]() ![]() ![]() It does! It does! I'm glad you wrote a second chapter. Some things just niggle at you and sometimes when you think you're done. You're not. I've been there |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is turning out to be a very original short story! I really like this chapter. I didn't want it to end. Narcissa and Hermione make a scary team. The end times are coming, Harry, Ron, and Neville are backing Draco. It's got to be the end of the world! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great second chapter. The idea of Draco in charge with Hermione and Narcissa behind him is rsther scary. |
![]() ![]() "Enhance" is the perfect word! Thank you so much for this gripping read; very excited for the conclusion and/or follow-up :-) Cheers! |
![]() ![]() ![]() i'm still loving this—you have a way with words and tales! (and i definitely know what you mean by insomnia and inspiration. ironic really.) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love the addition to this wonderful little story! As always you have outdone yourself! |
![]() ![]() ![]() One way that I judge an idea is by how much I wish I had thought of it. I soooooo wish I had thought of this great plot idea! They might be falling in love too quickly though! |
![]() ![]() ![]() It does indeed entrance the reader, making us wonder what will happen in the end, furthering the story and plot, therefor enhancing the story itself and the reading experience. |
![]() ![]() ![]() “To Hermione, the only person stubborn enough to take on the entire structure of government because her boyfriend has to do what she says.” This has GOT to be my favorite line you've ever written. I know I've said that before, and at this rate, chances are high I'll say it again. But I really and truly mean it this time. I am STILL wiping tears from my eyes. I'm even using unnecessary capitals. Greatest toast ever. I'm not exaggerating. Not even a little bit. I think you need seven stories so you post every day. School's back in session. What's your excuse now? |
![]() ![]() ![]() You'd know that I would love this of course. But here's why... It's an alternate version of Lady of the Lake. A post-war world where the wrong people are in charge, where Hermione and Draco plan to stage a coup to put Draco (instead of Hermione) in charge. I absolutely adore this and I loved seeing the former Slytherins, Narcissa, Ron and Neville all brought into this chapter. It's awesome. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story is an all time fave of mine. Cuz sometimes things are just f-ed up and you do the best you can and focus on he good that you still have. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Few questions: 1) why couldn't neveille or harry take draco as theirs? 2)so were the other prisioners able to be imancipated after they became slaves and only draco was still a slave? 3) how much time after the war is it? 4)how long from the first prisioner as a slave to when draco got out? 5)how long was dm living with hg before the kiss? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Another amazing Dramione story! Hopefully not just a one shot! |