Reviews for Protective Custody |
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Fiction is the Truth chapter 2 . 9/2/2020 The promise of a coup always makes things interesting. |
Guest chapter 3 . 8/11/2020 Lol. Wonderful ending. Slightly unsure about how I feel about the coop, and slightly worried about public opinion possibly turning against them for what they did, but that ending..Kingsley getting “tragically” killed by a “tiger”...that was just pure gold. Won me over completely. |
Guest chapter 2 . 8/11/2020 Nope, didn’t dilute! Thank you for this! (I loved the first part about mothers and how protecting the child gets the mother and child on your side) |
Guest chapter 1 . 8/11/2020 At first, I’d thought that this was after the first was and he was going to go and live with relatives kind of thing, not outright SLAVERY! Oh god, I hate Umbridge so much. Why is she still around!? It must hurt to be Draco. Thnx for the story. |
TinaMaki chapter 3 . 7/18/2020 except Shacklebolt, who, tragically, was killed by a tiger while on holiday with Narcissa Malfoy. Narcissa was fine, though she was overheard to say "three down.") . . . . . . . . . . Snrk ;) |
Serennos chapter 3 . 7/7/2020 What a talent you have. Your writing is clever, humorous, subversive and with a HEA to boot! Thank you. |
WandsandWhiskey chapter 3 . 6/24/2020 Omg, that was fantastic! Lol, never go against the team of Hermione and Narcissa... |
DrayMiaOnly chapter 3 . 6/20/2020 ok, the last line? freaking GOLD. LMAO |
Liza Brannypoo chapter 3 . 6/20/2020 I've just read Fairy Stone and this, I love love love love. Loved Narcissa in this. |
Montana chapter 2 . 6/3/2020 I love the triumph of this story. Especially now, when the world is doing *waves hands* all that. Seeing new charges in Minnesota was encouraging today (I’d have commented yesterday but iNtErUpTiOnS. Seeing crappy laws subverted and then destroyed is glorious. Hermione in the wand shop is great, and the short bits about Narcissa and the exiles have this sneaky power. “They should have killed Narcissa Malfoy” is great. The bit about making partisans is great. There is a lot of between the lines while being clear that feels cheeky and subtle and smart and fun. I’m glad you wrote this. |
Alyce and Indi chapter 3 . 5/30/2020 I love the Department of Mysteries bit almost as much as the ending. S. Both of them. XDXDXDXDXDXD |
Animekitty47 chapter 3 . 4/24/2020 Best political take over in all of fiction. And the tiger metaphor you highlighted and then used shamelessly was just perfect too. The bureaucrats not caring about the coup! The Unspeakables super not caring! It was all so funny and perfect! Even the two sentence epilogue which really, really shouldn't be funny but absolutely is. Thanks for posting this short, serious, yet funny story. |
Animekitty47 chapter 2 . 4/24/2020 It does indeed enhance it. It might even be better. |
elle chapter 3 . 4/18/2020 it's funny how harry and neville were considering becoming minister here and both turned it down. in a marauder's plan (that's what i read before this), they both take high positions each in their own place in wizarding britain (in case you haven't read it yet i will not specify). i never would have thought of draco becoming minister but then he was raised to be someone in a high position. the plan was brilliant! again i would like to reiterate that i love dumbledore's army. i hate that fred is dead here because this follows canon but still. they're all as together as they can be. congratulations to the new minister and new regime. sad to see kingsley dead as he was part of the light side in canon but i will never have forgiven such a part in executing the protective custody act. i never really liked narcissa but i do believe i understand that she'll do anything for her son. mothers. go figure. i hate the fact that the regular citizens didn't know that the ministry is detaining children. actual children. this is like our government. on the verge of martial law right now. i hate it. but then the coup happened and all will be well. i guess there's no point in dwelling in the wrongs of the past. they will be corrected now. hopefully, sooner rather than later. justice served. dolores umbridge. if i had my way i wouldn't have crucio-ed her immediately. something like the ways of the carrows would be in order first. and then, crucio. let her bleed. feel pain. slowly. maybe i would have used her quill on her. all over her body. till the room reeks of her blood. maybe i would have thrown her to the territory of the centaurs in the forbidden forest again. who knows. but she's dead. and that means is a compromise i'm forced to accept. have a great life hermione, draco, harry, ron, ginny, neville, luna, all others. love lots! thank you once more for a great story, stacie , |
elle chapter 2 . 4/18/2020 "I hope he appreciates you," Ronald Ronald Weasley, I love you! He's always a character quick to annoy me but I love him nevertheless! I thought he would be bitter here too but thank god he has someone and he's happy despite having faced a war at a young age of 17-18. Who are you doing it for, Hermione? For yourself? For everyone else? Just because it's the right thing to do? If the last, then I rally behind you. "Harry asked. There isn't much I wouldn't do for him," AND THAT MY FRIENDS. Is what I used to ship. Maybe I still do. I just read the wrong fic (not this but a harmony one) to think otherwise. But oh my! MOM! MY HEART! OH MY GOD LUNA! HI LUNA MY BABY! WHY DOES RON KEEP ON FLUSHING HES SUCH A CUTE LIL SHIT ! IS THERE SOMETHING GOING ON WITH HIM AND LUNA WHY ARE THEY THERE TOGETHER UWU and i approve Oops ... okay Ron and Lavender then! AND OH GINNY AND HARRY! YAY I love the dumbledore army so much! I can never stress that enough! I love you harry potter! |