So every action Dumbles did caused unneeded deaths due to replacing Harry. Even in this one he wouldve just forfeited but Neville forced him to act.

Then Dumbles letting more die to hold Voldy. So he can be released in secret from the ministry I suppose.

It's a considerable let down that they didnt seek Luna out and befriend her...

The 9 yr old girl? Why!? How would they get her signature and why add her? I'm guessing they wont guarentee the tasks being easy despite the little girl and the story is going to force her death or crippling just because? Even though she had no such part or risk in canon.

This is becoming rly unpleasant for no reason now.
Why all the names?

Doesn't matter? A kid isnt the slightest bit interested in info on his parents and looking into them? Losing the opportunity and the continued tragedy of his family and their friends?

Does not sound right.

I dont see how Remus couldve infected anyone and I seriously hate that they were killed off like that. Why the damned needless tragedy? Why is every event being guaranteed to go so bad? Even went out of the say to have Remus killed off.

Great story but I hate this chapter a great deal.

Dumbles needs to die slow.

A single firing and no one goes out of their way to track his godson? No one in the ministry did what is likely their duty to inform? Not on their own or contacting gringotts? No will?

Also, poor bird. Turned to glass.. messed up.

That is so damned sad. Ginny and the other unnamed kids. Ginny not even able to be buried. Seriously depressing.

I'd hoped he would still get Hedwig on his way out. That's a big shame. I get the feeling there may not be any talk of any property of the Potters from the goblins. Whether buildings or items.

Very well done story.

Great story but very much not a fan of Hermione being disabled like that. Bad enough with Harry but doubling up just sucks. I hope she at least recovers if not him too.

Dumbles being a piss off yet again and gave away Harry's stolen cloak. That he will likely never know of along with other family stuff he doesnt even know to question about.

This story has a permanent spot in my heart. Each time I read it it captures my mind for days on end. It is precious to me now. I am not a wordsmith so I do not have words with enough weight to convey my gratitude for this story, so I'll go with the simplest; Thank you for the light and the dark.

This was a blast, killed my sleep, but I'm glad to have read it. Thank you.

Your Snape is the best.

This is so perfect. Everything I want - I kinda hope future Harry memorized a certain pattern when he was back in time.

A beautiful chapter, all around.

Jeeze, Ron is much better in this time-line; maybe Ginny being killed helped? jk.