Reviews for Heterochromic
John chapter 1 . 1/30
Nice story
Guest chapter 1 . 1/21
Spanner96:
you say "I don't use this word (cuck) lightly."
Proceeds to use said word not only lightly but completely inaccurately.

Good lord, you're a fucking moron. You do know that don't you?
Also, you obviously haven't even read the whole thing or you'd know why Astoria acts the way she does.

Honestly, dumbasses like you are why all the talented authors leave ffn.
13thsephiroth chapter 1 . 11/29/2023
This was ummmmm well written. I like HP/AG fics but damn man you went there lol
HalfBlood Prince chapter 1 . 10/22/2023
It reminded me of the movie “back to the future”… This plot is too good for a One-shot… Honestly, I really liked the idea of a threesome between the sisters… If I had to complain about something it would be the censorship and the fact that it didn't continue the timeline from start to finish. XD
TheLordOfLightning chapter 1 . 9/10/2023
Fuckin' CALLED IT!
Don't know how, just the way the Heterochromia was pointed out made me think 'Huh, her eye are like Daphne's and Harry's... No way is it a time travelling Daughter of the two or something.'.
tieflin chapter 1 . 5/31/2023
Holy shit! I was expecting something but not that! Well done, captivating, excellent story!
Guest chapter 1 . 4/20/2023
Invest is Wincest!
Guest chapter 1 . 4/1/2023
I am both proud and ashamed that i guess Astoria is Harry daughter. I don’t know if i am smart or i am just fucked in the head.
Spanner96 chapter 1 . 3/24/2023
I don’t use this word lightly, but it’s the only word that seems to fit here… Harry is a cuck. Seriously, he has NO backbone and if Astoria told him to watch her sleep with some other guy he’d stammer out an affirmative and follow her command. How in the flying fuck does that relationship dynamic appeal to people? Let’s also not forget you’ve had Astoria try and love potion he and Daphne, and we’re meant to like her?

You’ve got a story in which none of the three main characters are even remotely likeable and have zero chemistry. Forget struggling to enjoy, this is impossible to enjoy.
Spanner96 chapter 1 . 3/24/2023
I’m struggling to enjoy this.

Astoria is annoying as fuck. “I just know him. They’d be perfect together. Why? Just because.” Even as a bystander I wand to backhand her and tell her to mind her own bloody business.

Daphne’s a bit cold, and not in a disinterested way… in a bitchy way.

The real annoyance is Harry though, as the only character that actually has an established personality in canon. Everything about this is contrary to his character. He’s saying sorry for failing to get with Daphne, instead of getting mad that some uppity bitch is completely disregarding his own feelings and trying to force him into something. The second she got angry at him for not talking to Daphne, canon-Harry WOULD have gotten angry in return and told her off for presuming to order him around instead of being cowed. Slight personality changes to canon are fine and larger ones are fine when there’s an actual catalyst for the change, but you’ve got canon-Harry and just decided to make him not-Harry.
RicFule chapter 1 . 3/24/2023
You contradicted yourself? Exhibit A: Their surprise visit was prompted by a most curious occurrence; Astoria Lily Potter's name appeared in the Hogwarts Book. Exhibit B: ... but tradition dictated the daughter take her mother's given name as her middle name.

For the second of those to be true, Astoria's original name would have had to be Astoria Daphne Potter. But as it isn't, that means that they could have given her a different middle name
Lord Cartwright chapter 1 . 3/12/2023
As soon as you mentioned she had one green eye and one blue like her sister's, I knew who Astoria was...
PheonixBJB chapter 1 . 1/10/2023
Well that was… insane. But also well written good job
archangel7431 chapter 1 . 12/10/2022
good work
Kagami Keina chapter 1 . 10/28/2022
Good Story
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