Quite the twist at the end!

wtf holy fuck good story but damn that twist tho. never read anything like this and i love it fav for sure.

i have no words. the end hit me like a truck. holyyyy shit

Honestly I knew exactly what was going on as soon as you mentioned the eye colors of various characters. The how... well, that was definitely worth reading to the end!

Nice story

Spanner96:
you say "I don't use this word (cuck) lightly."
Proceeds to use said word not only lightly but completely inaccurately.

Good lord, you're a fucking moron. You do know that don't you?
Also, you obviously haven't even read the whole thing or you'd know why Astoria acts the way she does.

Honestly, dumbasses like you are why all the talented authors leave ffn.

This was ummmmm well written. I like HP/AG fics but damn man you went there lol

It reminded me of the movie “back to the future”… This plot is too good for a One-shot… Honestly, I really liked the idea of a threesome between the sisters… If I had to complain about something it would be the censorship and the fact that it didn't continue the timeline from start to finish. XD

Fuckin' CALLED IT!
Don't know how, just the way the Heterochromia was pointed out made me think 'Huh, her eye are like Daphne's and Harry's... No way is it a time travelling Daughter of the two or something.'.

Holy shit! I was expecting something but not that! Well done, captivating, excellent story!

Invest is Wincest!

I am both proud and ashamed that i guess Astoria is Harry daughter. I don’t know if i am smart or i am just fucked in the head.

I don’t use this word lightly, but it’s the only word that seems to fit here… Harry is a cuck. Seriously, he has NO backbone and if Astoria told him to watch her sleep with some other guy he’d stammer out an affirmative and follow her command. How in the flying fuck does that relationship dynamic appeal to people? Let’s also not forget you’ve had Astoria try and love potion he and Daphne, and we’re meant to like her?

You’ve got a story in which none of the three main characters are even remotely likeable and have zero chemistry. Forget struggling to enjoy, this is impossible to enjoy.

I’m struggling to enjoy this.

Astoria is annoying as fuck. “I just know him. They’d be perfect together. Why? Just because.” Even as a bystander I wand to backhand her and tell her to mind her own bloody business.

Daphne’s a bit cold, and not in a disinterested way… in a bitchy way.

The real annoyance is Harry though, as the only character that actually has an established personality in canon. Everything about this is contrary to his character. He’s saying sorry for failing to get with Daphne, instead of getting mad that some uppity bitch is completely disregarding his own feelings and trying to force him into something. The second she got angry at him for not talking to Daphne, canon-Harry WOULD have gotten angry in return and told her off for presuming to order him around instead of being cowed. Slight personality changes to canon are fine and larger ones are fine when there’s an actual catalyst for the change, but you’ve got canon-Harry and just decided to make him not-Harry.

You contradicted yourself? Exhibit A: Their surprise visit was prompted by a most curious occurrence; Astoria Lily Potter's name appeared in the Hogwarts Book. Exhibit B: ... but tradition dictated the daughter take her mother's given name as her middle name.

For the second of those to be true, Astoria's original name would have had to be Astoria Daphne Potter. But as it isn't, that means that they could have given her a different middle name