Reviews for Heterochromic
EdTheBeast chapter 1 . 11/2/2021
Very twisty time travel!
Guest chapter 1 . 10/24/2021
Yow, wtf. hahahahahaha. Good story though. There's a lot of room to work with but I your premise makes it hard. Icky and all the stuff, but still fun.
Fuck Names chapter 1 . 10/13/2021
Lmfao. Sweet home Alabama. This is fucking hilarious.
DeadFish37 chapter 1 . 10/11/2021
That was an experience.
taha82 falcon chapter 1 . 9/27/2021
Well done one of the best fanfictions I've seen
bangohan chapter 1 . 9/21/2021
damn Daphne got ntr'd by her own daughter...
real talk though, this story was good
ApEx0918 chapter 1 . 9/14/2021
I had a hunch how this was gonna go when you mentioned her eyes but i dismissed it immediately…. Turns out i was right
Anonymous Wandmaker chapter 1 . 9/4/2021
Lol, I already knew the twist immediately you described her eyes at the beginning.

Weird read but bravo writer!
Luthien'sLight chapter 1 . 9/3/2021
Frankly, I'm unsure as to how to feel about this fic. on the one hand, it's fantastically written and enjoyable. On the other hand... well, you know. The twist. A little disturbing, and regardless of the excuses given still feels messed up. Still, a fascinating story! Well done, author!
RonRR chapter 1 . 7/18/2021
Interesting story.

Thank you for writing,

Ron
K chapter 1 . 5/31/2021
A most interesting and enjoyable story.
Spider of Dreams chapter 1 . 5/30/2021
Kinda disturbing how this played out
x2leoj chapter 1 . 5/29/2021
Fantastic twist, it made me think back to all those previous events and conversation which make so much more sense now. Very boderline cancel with the Father/Daughter thing but you pulled it off well.
Sparkling Ratemis chapter 1 . 5/27/2021
Hmm, not sure how I feel about the story. Well written with few spelling mistakes, nice idea. The plot wasn't to surprising. Would have liked a longer epiloque. This way it's just not really really resolved...
ThisIsStorm101 chapter 1 . 5/16/2021
Damn bro, this shit fire
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