|Reviews for Watch|
| Werde Spinner chapter 1 . 6/20/2016
Kili, you are adorable and I love you, but what I really wanna talk about here is Fili. (Because my priority is always the more majestic older brother. Sorry, Kili.) The slight jealousy on Kili's part because Fili seems to be better than anything? Fili's worry that he won't live up to the heavy responsibility he's got to face? Dang, that hits home.
And they knock their foreheads together! XD Precious darling noodles.
| Moonraykir chapter 1 . 6/7/2015
A nice little bit of character development.
| Tiny Teddy Bear chapter 1 . 6/3/2015
LOL! Love their relationship.
| mille libri chapter 1 . 2/11/2015
I love this - Fili so very much the elder, the more skilled, with the weight of the future more heavy on him, but the rivalry so subtle and almost not even there. They remind me a lot of my own sons here.
| Starry Pink chapter 1 . 1/29/2015
That was so cute!
| Dragon MoonX chapter 1 . 1/21/2015
This is good. Gave me a good laugh it did. Well done. :)
| Astaldowen chapter 1 . 1/2/2015
Hahahaha I loved this! The last line was great. I loved the light you shed on some of the aspects of Fili and Kili's characters: Kili feeling like he's under his brother's shadow; Fili being nervous about possibly inheriting Erebor, etc. This was great!
| Nuka chapter 1 . 1/2/2015
I always wondered why there was a twig in Kili's hair...
| Stardurin1217 chapter 1 . 1/2/2015
Awe great job I love it :)