Reviews for Lifting Shadows
maggiemay chapter 1 . 12/1/2002
Excellent writing. I bet you had a beta reader!
Guest chapter 1 . 11/30/2002
Oh please keep going. It's so nice to read a well written piece, regardless of which way it swings (although Luby is always good!). You have the characters down perfectly. Nice one.
MustangSally chapter 1 . 11/30/2002
hey, there is nothing wrong with lubys...i have had enough carbys to last me a long while. good start to your story, i can't wait to read

bubble girl chapter 1 . 11/30/2002 this isn't a carby
Guest chapter 1 . 11/30/2002
AHHH! this should be carby...definately not luby...ewww
HoppyToad chapter 1 . 11/30/2002
I loved this! And this is coming from someone who's been anti-Luby since pretty much forever. I think you have the character's mannerisms down really well. And your Abby was especially in character. Great work!
Mrs Eyre chapter 1 . 11/30/2002
I'm so pleased that there are those willling to risk the Wrath Of Carby and present an alternative point of view of this relationship. It's a neat reversal of roles between Luka and Carter which neatly underlines Abby's inability to be simultaneously sexually and emtionally intimate.

I loved "Blonde: What had she been thinking?".

Looking forward to the next chapter - soon I hope.
norla chapter 1 . 11/29/2002
Oh Kate! Very nice. I only wish.