|Reviews for crawlersout|
| WackyJ chapter 11 . 20h
Wonderful story, I hope to see more. I do love when the time travel concept is used for more than simply reliving the characters life. You have made this into a story I look forward to reading more of, thank you
| Tarter-tot chapter 11 . 9/18
I love this story! I'm going to be honest, I found this story looking for a Harry x Tom Riddle FanFiction but now I'm thinking about a Harry x Gellert Grindlewald FanFiction... XD I'm almost hoping that (as Tom gets older, obviously) the story will progress into a love triangle of sorts with both Gellert and Tom vying for her affections. I find that I could care less who should ends up with if I'm going to be completely honest. Except I am hoping for a romantic side to her relationship with Gellert. I was wondering, with Harry being the mistress of Death and therefore being (questionably) immortal, does this mean you'll gift her with immortal youth as well? If she cannot die because of her position as Death's mistress will she then be young forever? Obviously, you probably already have plans for this and ideas of your own that will tie into the story so I don't expect a response! I look forward for when you have enough free time to start writing again! Thank you for writing this fan Fiction!
| zarg0n chapter 11 . 9/16
Is this actually a Tom/Harry pairing story? Because it reads more and more like a Gellert/Harry story to me.
| MayaHikari chapter 8 . 9/14
started this story very excited. understand the adjustment for Tom. Harry hands off. Harry - Tom started to piss me off and start to hate them. will set this story aside when I'm in a better mood before I start cursing. notice this from the previous I made for the past few hours. hope for a non-cloak and dagger genre. see u later.
| MayaHikari chapter 6 . 9/14
so devoted to the cause. they destroy what unwanted they deem. tsk
| Lila Dunmare chapter 11 . 9/9
Fascinating ! I love your fanfiction I look forward to the next chapter !
| Marryl126 chapter 11 . 9/7
Amazing story and the way you are describing is mesmerizing. I am waiting for the next uodate. Please update soon.
| xxxLeanniexxx chapter 11 . 9/5
Harry may find herself guiding more than one Dark Lord on a less violent path!
| BleckBlah5956 chapter 11 . 9/4
Sometimes I find myself skipping paragraphs that seem to just be long details. Though I really try my hardest not to do that because then I start getting a little lost. But all in all I am loving this story please update soon as you can.
| sarahmchugs chapter 11 . 9/3
I love it. I for one, think the pacing is great and I love seeing Harry and Grindlewald together. I think it is a very interesting story amd I can't wait until you come out with the next chapter.
| Tempduloupe chapter 11 . 9/2
This is one of the few stories that I do not have to skim parts of. Though I will be honest, I am completely sucked in by your portrayal of Grindelwald. Please continue this story soon. I don't think I can wait until 2019
| JackRenee chapter 11 . 9/1
Another lovely chapter to gobble up. I had to go back and re-read a few things, but I'm glad I did.
This Grindle doesn't seem evil at all. Perhaps they aren't the same, and this is more of an alternate dimension? I know history is really the victor's story, but this seems a bit extreme.
As for your questions:
The pacing is fine for your story- I mean, your writing supports it, but I would like to see more action. I'm eager to see adult-Tom and how Harry reconciles the timelines. Surely she will have to choose?
I tend to skip through exposition, such as the description of the sky burials, parties, or people that seem secondary to the story. I pay close attention to conversations between Harry and Grindle and Tom, not so much Ron, or Hermione. I also pay close attention to Tom's conversations with his classmates and Grindle, and less to his internal monologue.
I'd love to see more of Harry being bad ass witch, but whether that makes for a good story *shrug* ... I like what you're doing. Your vision for the story is the best; I'm looking forward to 2019.
| Claire Aozora chapter 11 . 8/31
I love the story, and please believe me I didn't skip a word, which speak volume since I often do so in most wordy fanfics. I love the small details, like how you still remember that Washy once told Tom that Ancient Magic is all about curses and blood magic and you seamlessly put it in the latest chapter as an offhand remark (or is it wesley? well, see what I mean? I read the fanfic in one sitting yet I forget by the end of the day) it's bring more character to Tom, in fact, each time you shifts the POVs they are so easy to distinguish, each POV has their own personality, be it Harry's, Tom's, or Gellert's.
About the pace, to me it doesn't really matter. I like it the way it is. Though if you suddenly changed the pace I'm sure I'll be okay with that. Since I know there's so much mysteries waiting to be unfold. Like, about Harry's dimensional travel : is it a thing in her original time, I mean do people also can do it or is it only because it's 'her'? What about the house? As far as I know Harry's interior is more to modern style than of the 30-40s, but is it? What about the technology then? Telly, AC, Computer, etc (I do know Tom caught Harry using laptop tho) does she bring them also? I am sure the story said about 'air conditioned room' when Tom and Spot lounging together, but how? Charmed or AC? (it's personal really, I am an interior designer in training and can't help but wonder XD)
Aside for that, I totally love the plot, it's totally promising. Tom's thirst for affection, Harry indulging most of his whims, Spot knowing gestures, Gellert the so not cardboard villain, all of them are endearing. Tbh, it's the first time I read GellertxHarry but I'm not complaining, Tom's slight jealousy is totally amusing. All in all I totally enjoy it through. Now, I'll sit there, making sure to follow and favorite the story and then browsing for more Tomarry treats while waiting for the next update (and no need to rush!)
| Guest chapter 11 . 8/31
This is one of my favorite stories ever.
| Guest chapter 3 . 8/31
A great, original story!