I need an other chapter ... I love your way of writing and please continue

woah character deaths.. pretty nice! keep up the good work

I love how naruto is in this story like he is sooo good. He is the lead star for me with that lovely character you got going for him. So delicious I cant even LOL

i always enjoyed reading a fic where sakura's being a whore. interesting.

Okay, wooow. So that's how messed up Sakura's relationship is? Whew Sasuke.
Anyways, Hinata KNOWS! Things are going to get interesting. I'm looking forward to the next chapter!

TTYLxox!

I just hope that Sakura won't get screwed over. But other than that I'm looking forward to more

you please my black soul with this story

Love your story!

All the characters in here deserve what they get.
Naruto-settled for second best and lying to himself. He only ended up with Hinata because she will reciprocate.

Sakura-losing all self-respect and making herself a toy for men

Hinata-never truly caring for Naruto and his dream. Just selfish desires.

But I hope Sakura gets a happy end. Don't know about Naruto since he's pretty much a jerk to Sakura here.

So you have already started someone's countdown...I wonder who you will end.

Anyway, my heart goes to Sakura...she is absolutely helpless to the two most important men in her life and her base desires. I'm still hoping Naruto is the one who is offed at the end...I don't know why though, I mostly only read Narucentric fics...

Ugh, my heart...poor Hinata. Things are starting to get heavy now...I feel like a climax is coming soon *perverted laugh*. Can't wait to see how you make it end.
I'm betting on Naruto dying. I don't know why I'm leaning that way...just haven't read about Naruto dying for good in a while. He always reincarnates, is sealed or has an adventure beyond the dead.

Man, Naruto is such a noob at cheating...does he forget that he lives in a ninja village? I bet any Inazuka that has entered the Hokage building could tell someone had sex recently. Lucky for them Kiba hasn't appeared yet. He is not the most discreet person, and his loyalty probably goes of to Hinata first.

Oh man oh man...what are you DOING Naru?! Do you know how strong your genes are? They fucking destroyed the Byakugan when you made a pair of babies with Hinata...do you think Sasuke won't notice when her children come out blue eyed with platinum pink her?(That would be an awesome combination though)
Read some reviews...glad there won't be any SasuHina...hopefully you won't kill her off for no reason like some reviewers request...she is a sweet and kind mother(I hope)...you can't leave them with a cheating dad...

Part of me doesn't like this since cheating is a no no for me...but is it twisted of me to find great satisfaction that the tables aren't the opposite for once?(i.e Hinata cheating on Naru with Sasuke).
Oh well, can't say it isn't a naughty story to read. Very graphic and some nice dirty talk. The shame is strong in this one.
First time I read something like this after NaruHina became canon. I'm still crossing my fingers that Hinata won't get revenge on him...might be a good way to get his attention focused on her, making him jealous to bring out his possessive side for her. But I can't see Hinata getting together with someone else without being repulsed at herself knowing she cheated on her beloved.

I feel like Naruto is just letting loose his past feelings with Sakura and his immature hidden dislike for Sasuke that he may carry around still. Wonder if it will all just blow up in his face. Sasuke has some of the blame here since she just left his wife to take care of their daughter by herself while she works who knows how many hours a week at the hospital.

Great chapter! I really liked the lemon. It was the first time so far that they got pretty intimate. I know this sounds strange, but I personally wouldn't appreciate it if this story ended happily i.e Naruto and Sakura end up together and all is well. To me, the only possible outcome is a tragic one or a bittersweet one. If you do plan on hooking them up, you have to take in note that there has to be some repercussions. While I do love the indefility in this story, (seriously, it really captures the tragedy of the ending and the bitterness Naruto/Sakura must feel. Plus, it's hot!), you have to take in mind that it is still a serious topic and that a generic happy ending would probably be as bad as... Well, chapter 700 itself. Anyway, this isn't me criticizing your story, it's just that I happened to see some reviews that somewhat made me anxious that you might try and appeal to the majority instead of writing what you feel is best.

I am me, again XD. Emoti, this is my favourite fic narusaku. THANK YOU! I hoping for more hot moments narusaku, is the best medicine after the horrible and ilogic Naruto's end.

You are an incredible author, you have to know it. I love this passional and animal Naruto. Amazing.

Who wants more hot narusaku moments put the hands in the air! I think all your readers.

Im waiting for the next chapter!

Thanks for the fast update and thanks for letting us know that there will be no SasuHina, I really want to kiss you right now! ;) knowing that there will be character(s) death really make my day, I just hope that person will be cough* white eyed cough* bitch cough* and Sasugay cough* please update soon :D