Reviews for Chisel
Anonymous chapter 42 . 7/3/2015
I enjoyed the chapter ... until the ending.
Pleaseee tell us she survived! This arc title is scaring me.
JumperthreeDS chapter 42 . 7/3/2015
Guest chapter 42 . 7/2/2015
MrPerson0 chapter 42 . 7/2/2015
Have been following this story for a while, and have to say that it's a great one! That ending though, really hope she didn't get skewered...
ajani's apprentice chapter 42 . 7/2/2015
Wow. Anna sounds noble here. At the beginning at least. also, nice to see her get the spotlight.

You know, for a second there I thought Rodrigo was decent. Then I saw him try to get a one-night-stand from Anna. My opinion shattered immediately.

"I'd hate to see what the get together look like." Don't worry Anna, not everyone would say that. I'd love to be at one. It should be good for laughs, if a little confusing.

For some reason, I believe our little mention of the dust explosion will come back and bite Anna and the Shepherds in the rear. For example, Walheart putting that info to use.

No way. No freaking way. YOU DID NOT JUST KILL LISSA! NO! Chrom is going to be livid. Losing a second sister.

I'll be back in three days. Amd I expect Lissa alive or else I'll find some way to make your characters come to life, and Chrom, Lon'qu, and Owain will hunt you down. Yeah, I wish.
mega-dark chapter 42 . 7/2/2015
That cliff hanger man that cliff hanger.

First off, I'm sending Anna to Mythbusters because I'm not belling half the stuff she's spouting. Than again, I could use google but that isn't nearly as fun.

Anna was awesome this chapter. She makes deep cuts and her haggling skills were awesome.

Good luck with the next chapter
Dr.McJiggleNuggets chapter 42 . 7/2/2015
Dont kill off lissa
Rhivan chapter 41 . 6/29/2015
I was actually imagining Robin as a Dragon Chicken... Like Grima horns and spitting Dark Fire around. Dragon claws, and being black and scaly... Thanks for mentioning it in the authors notes :P
gokart48 chapter 41 . 6/29/2015
Olivia and Say'ri was a nice show of the transition of culture through the ages. Something that happens more than we think.

Interesting discussion between Lucina and Ricken. You already explained the depth behind it in the author's note so not much for me to say, but it is nice to see the inner side of Ricken and his motivations, fears, and anxieties.

I've never bee a fan of Severa's personality, so I can't judge it too fairly, but otherwise it was a great chapter.
LiamReyas chapter 40 . 6/29/2015
Geez, not only a nice continuation of Robin and Cordelia's conversation, but a nice conversation between Lucina and Ricken to semi-parallel Robin and Cordelia's, along with one dang good Lon'qu dump that includes all of the best character bits for him. Sure, I generally like pairing him with Cherche for that story, but you fit it in well with his romance with Lissa and it's great. Also it made Cynthia happy, which is always a plus. well, happy and sad. sappy.
Guest chapter 19 . 6/29/2015
Awesome story! Perfect blend of action, humor, and fluff :P. I just recently started playing fire emblem, and am on on currently what you might call a "fire emblem high". I'll probably be obsessed with it for a while, amd this story is wholly satisfying. Thank ya and kudos!
LiamReyas chapter 39 . 6/29/2015
The focus on just a friendly conversation between Cordelia and Robin was nice, but I really liked the small time you devoted to Gregor just... being Gregor. He has some of the best supports in the game, thanks to his days as a mercenary, and it gave him quite the unique make up. Shame you didn't include my favorite Gregor support flashback in there though. The one with Tharja about... well I don't want to spoil it if you haven't seen that one.

Anyway great chapter!
Guest chapter 41 . 6/29/2015
Gerome. the hero yillse deserves, but not the hero it needs!
TwiliRupee chapter 41 . 6/29/2015
I just love the way you write this story. You focus on everyone in the Shepherds, which is something that I find it hard to do. That and each chapter is laced with humor, even if there's a battle going on. I'm glad that you're updating so frequently. Gives me something to look forward to! Keep it up!
ajani's apprentice chapter 41 . 6/29/2015
Well, nice to see a bit about Nowi. Now I understand why she likes Tag so much. Animal instinct.

Ricken is a devious little demon.

Maribelle really could have done that differently. Oh well. She'll always be stuck up.

Chicken Robin He turns into a dinosaur, the fell blood awaking the dinosaur part of the chickens DNA. JURASSIC WORLD! Sorry.

Yeah, Lucina and Robin's wedding. Is it really going to be bigger then Chrom's? Who am I kidding, once he's in on it, he'll make sure it's better then his.
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