Reviews for Chisel
mega-dark chapter 41 . 6/29/2015
Even more supports this chapter.

I'm not sure if I'm reading too much into this or if I'm just listening to the song too much but it looks like Say'ri was humming some of Aqua's song there. Probably just me. Also, I didn't read the final part of your Author Note's last chapter so you don't know who I ship. I ship KamuixAqua, KamuixFelcia and many many more.

Nowi and Vaike is are pretty funny and I'm surprised Nowi has only had alcohol 3 times in her life. Who in their right mind would give Nowi a drink if they didn't know she was a thousand years old?

Gaius and Maribelle wish for a grand wedding will probably not compare to the one everyone is waiting for. Not like they'll mind.

I'm still surprised Lucina hasn't dropped the fact that Ricken has a kid just to tease. Guess she is really good at keeping her mouth shut. Still, nice development and future evil chicken joke for the future.

And finally Morgan and Severa. Most authors have a really hard time writing the Tsundere arch type. They either have too much jerk and not enough sweet or too much sweet and not enough jerk. I think you got the happy medium here since Severa has a reason to be a jerk to Morgan until she gets it and then the sweet comes in.

So it's a nice chapter with great development. Can't wait for the next one in three days.
CthulhuIsReal chapter 41 . 6/29/2015

Barrel supports.

If only this was an actual thing in the game.
LiamReyas chapter 38 . 6/28/2015
The depth and complexity of walhart's forces and how to deal with them is rough. I always forget just how much of a threat Walhart is until I'm playing those chapters. just remembering him on Lunatic mode... geez.

Nice to see Morgan showing the 'symptoms' of her parentage with that suggestion, and how Robin ran with it. I'm just hoping everything works out for them. It would suck from their plan to fail and get caught. But you seem to be trying to play up Marcellus as a much more credible threat this time around.
LiamReyas chapter 37 . 6/28/2015
The feels! It's too sweet! Gotta go do a workout just to work out the sugar! It's a really great chapter and thank you for writing it!
LiamReyas chapter 36 . 6/28/2015
Ah that scene with Lucina and Merchant Anna was a sweet slice of cheesecake. Loved every second of it. You write really well and create a great world that still makes me associate with awakening while letting it spread its wings.
LiamReyas chapter 34 . 6/28/2015
Sumia taking over the revenge seeking and Robin giving Lucina a second wish... interesting...
LiamReyas chapter 33 . 6/28/2015
I'm playing catch-up, but I wanted to comment on this chapter and say just how fun it is. It's nice to see Morgan being introduced to the shepards. The slower pace isn't bothering me one bit. Looking forward to continue reading.
ajani's apprentice chapter 40 . 6/28/2015
I like this a lot. Lucina talking with Ricken, Robin continuing with Cordelia, Cynthia finding out about Lon'qu and Lissa. I really liked this a lot. Especially the Lon'qu part. Nice to see a bit more of the guy. Also, loved that little rivalry Chrom and Lon'qu had. And the fight they had after Lon'qu admitted his love to Lissa. Haha. Robin is going to have 'fun' when he admits.

I totally agree with Corrin/Azura (Aqua)! Foe some reason I look at it and see Robin/Lucina. It'll proabably be differet but I still see it. Maybe because Azura kinda looks like Lucina (She does to me!) and Corrin and Robin are pretty alike. Both default have white hair, both have a major thing with dragons, both don't know about their birth family at first.

Also, do you know about the major thing with Luna, Lazwald and Odin, the Severa, Inigo and Owain look-alikes? If you don't and want to know, tell me. If you don't want to be spoiled let me know. And if you do know, what do you think of it?
Guest chapter 40 . 6/27/2015
I would go with the love triangle. I don't see many of those with rufuruki and it would be a breath of fresh air to one of my favourite ships. Great chapter as always.

Guest chapter 40 . 6/27/2015
A "bit" protective? There's a freakin tsukkomi up in here. i'm just imagining Cynthia let slip that Sumia is shipping Robin and Lucina. W00T MARATHON IS HERE!
GrandmasterRed chapter 40 . 6/26/2015
Corrin x Camilla XP
ShadowKnight394 chapter 40 . 6/26/2015
I like the way you had it split up into three main interactions this chapter, as it gives each character involved time to develop without being interrupted by other stories. I also like the way Lucina and Robin both have a single person to talk to, and it ends up being about their feelings. It is especially ironic to me seeing that in my original, blind run of Awakening I had S-Supported Ricken and Cordelia. About your A/N, as much as I like Aqua/Azura, I am marrying Felicia (the pink-haired maid) first.
gokart48 chapter 40 . 6/26/2015
Robin and Cordelia's talk reminds me so much of high school. Damn, in a school of less than 100, it seemed like everyone knew everything about everyone. At least in this case the rumors are true. Robin and Lucina destined to be a great couple.
mega-dark chapter 40 . 6/26/2015
Awesome, I got something to look forward too 3 days from now.

The drama in this weeks chapter was great and evenly spaced. I was kind of expecting a longer story out of Cynthia but then again I can understand why there wasn't. Everything else in this chapter was great and I see nothing wrong with it. Although I will admit I don't give these characters enough credit for how insightful they are sometimes.

Excellent chapter and good luck with the next one.
Guest chapter 28 . 6/24/2015
Well, Book of Naga, here we come. Make it happen.
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