Best chapter. 10/10- IGN

WHEN DID ROBIN KISS LUCINA!? WHEN I NEED TO REREAD THAT CHAPTER!

This is amazing!
I just finished reading all the chapters and I love how you portrayed the characters in you own unique way. It makes them seem new and fresh rather then the stereo typical characters everyone writes about. I can't wait for the marathon of chapters coming (hopefully soon)

Dude, this chapter was freaking amazing xD Wow, give Sumia a few days to try and get them together, nothing large happens. Give Cordelia 8 hours and she makes the guy admit he wants to court Lucina xD Mad respect for Cordelia.
Overall, I think the best part about this fic is how you can write character interactions that are so amusing, yet also seem genuine at the same time Sure, the Sheperds are kind of a crazy group, but just watching them interract makes you want to invest so much into them- that may be the central charm of Awakening in general :)
Something I find very amusing- try to imagine that last part visually, like you were actually watching something like a show or an anime. The camera is showing the two barrels from the outside, with just a tiny amount of light coming in from outside the caravan allowing us to see the inventory... the shot of the barrels is slowly zooming out, revealing a little more of the total frame of the inside of the caravan. While this is happening, you hear the two speak the last few lines... "I may have kissed her." Suddendly, the zoom stops right after that line, like even the camera it self cannot believe what Robin just said.. Now, imagine Cordelia's barrel just bursting open, because of the masive spasm her body just made. I just crack up after visualizing that xD
Anyway, I am very exited to see if this conversation continues in the next chapter :D

The Gregor part was unexpected but I enjoyed it. Keep up the good work, also sorry I put this review on the first chapter too I clicked the wrong button.

The Gregor part was unexpected but I enjoyed it. Keep up the good work

What did Anna do to the fat fellow. WHAT DID SHE DO?! Sorry, I'm curious.

No offense Robin, but you were no innocent bystander.

Okay, that was a good idea. Having a conversation between Robin and Cordelia. It gives insight into both of them and I'm assuming will be helpful later on.

Vaike picking flowers? HAHAHAHAHAHA! ok, now that I know, I'll have to be careful, lest he comes through an Outrealm gate and kills me.

That was unexpected. To see Gregor's memories. I'm surprised, and happy, you did that. It really developed his character and I really liked seeing it.

Wow, Cordelia did a good job. Though I'm with Robin. I don't want to know what goes in those meetings that the female shepherds have.

Also, Robin didn't mention that LUCINA IS MARRIED! Or she has a kid.

Dude, you should probably make a similar convo with Lucina!

Drat, I was going to ask you about your opinion on Fire Emblem Fates. I'm a spoiler hound, I got know what it's about. I also don't have a 3ds so I have no teeth in the game so say. But I'll respect your wishes and not talk about it.

But I will ask when are you going to start writing about it because dude that would be awesome.

Back to the story, I'm actually surprised at all the back story and heart and heart that went on in this chapter. It was rather sweet in some places and funny in others. And really that's what this whole chapter is and I love it. I'm wondering who you're going to switch to next chapter because I get the feeling Gallows 2 onward will be characters talking until crap hits the fan.

Great chapter and good luck with the next chapter. And stay away from Gamefaqs, Tumblr, and Tvtropes to avoid spoilers.

HAHA! What shenanigans!

Pirates of Carribean made me look up the word eunuch, wish i hadn't.

Good to see a new chapter, and I am very exited to see a stream of them coming later :)
So, one of the crystals was sunken? That's new, but it also makes the whole crystal-gathering thing more of it's own thing, since at no point did it ever really feel like you were looking for them in the game. You sort of just did what you were already doing, and you got some extra rewards for it. The Valm arc should have recieved better focus in the game... but I guess that is hard because nearly everyone you can recruit in the time span of this arc is one of the children, and futhermore, you had to not give them central roles in the plot, since there was a chance you had not gotten some of them, if any because of clumsy deaths of parents. So... I guess it would almost be impossible to make the arc all that grand, since you only get three new characters after the Gangrel arc, and one of them is Say'ri who only gets two supports. If you wanted to introduce more new charactes, it would simply be an overload of units xD
Brace yourself dude, new IF information was revealed in a direct in a little while back, and while I got unintentionally spoiled, I have to say the content is rather awesome, and you will probably look forward to it xD Just beware, there be spoilers everywhere from now out, although this particular thing had nothing to do with the story.
I just hope it doesn't take a year for IF to get out of Japan, just like with Awakening :/

BTW, Argent's silver. Pretty badass anyways. DARK SOULS REFERENCE.

Haha, it's always when you least expect it, a Dark Souls reference slips out. It'll be intetesting to see how you handle the Gravelord himself in your story.

WAAH O GOT SO EXCITED